John Hamilton Poet Rhyme

With My Mind's Eye, I Can See

With my mind's eye, I can see...

                                   With my mind's eye, I can see... everything
                                                       as it should be
                                 people living together without fear, in harmony
                                        helping each other, being truly happy

                                      With my mind's eye, I can see...perfectly
                                      the world as a kindlier, gentler place to be

                                    With my mind's eye, I can see...true liberty
                                       freedom from fear, freedom from pain
                                                  freedom from hypocrisy

                                    With my mind's eye, I can see...true justice
                                             for every man, woman, and child
                                               no more racial profiling, rapists 
                                                          or pedophiles

                               With my mind's eye, I can see... peace and security
                                     when the hungry go from famine... to feast
                                      I can even see peace... in the Middle East

                               With my mind's eye, I can see... an earthly paradise
                                              living forever in perfect health
                                                 Why don't you give it a try?


John Derek Hamilton
May 27,2016

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R.A. Marschall June 30, 2016 at 7:42 PM John, This is a great poem filled with the good things we all should be able to see John Hamilton July 3, 2016 at 8:06 PM Thanks R.A for your encouraging visit and words, with eyes of faith we can see, sadly though not the possession of many people today.

Joanna Daniel June 1, 2016 at 4:13 AM Eyes of Faith can sure change the view for the better:) John Hamilton June 1, 2016 at 9:02 AM You're right, too many rely on a human source to bring a change that only God can do, and it's coming soon, we just need to endure. Thanks a lot Jo much appreciated. JDH

Lewis Nyaga May 28, 2016 at 3:36 AM John.. I loved this poem and its full dose of optimism and hope.. i can also picture the paradise this world is meant to be..// blessings John Hamilton May 28, 2016 at 5:45 PM Thanks Lewis for your visit and comments, we sure need to visualize it more and more each day!

Tim Smith May 27, 2016 at 9:17 PM I wish more would be able to see John...wonderful poem John Hamilton May 27, 2016 at 9:32 PM Thanks Tim, well that's the goal right? Helping others to see it!