Andrea Dietrich Poet Ottava rima

With Joy Overflowing

Romance is in bloom when it's new and sweet

like rose buds opening. Love is growing!

The flutter feeling each time that you meet;

the kisses and the knowing you are glowing!

The realizing that you feel complete

and your heart with joy is overflowing.

Nothing else could be more worth living for.

Oh, to keep it going forevermore!



Written May 7, 2017

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Kim Rodrigues June 30, 2017 at 10:29 PM Lovely, Andrea! Congrats!

Paul Callus May 30, 2017 at 10:52 AM You paint young love with such warm and delightful touches, Andrea. Belated congrats on this merited podium finish! Regards // paul

Constance La France May 22, 2017 at 8:43 AM Andrea congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write

Joseph May May 21, 2017 at 9:11 AM Congrats on your win Andrea

Vladislav Raven May 15, 2017 at 10:16 AM Your pen has written such an excellent piece Andrea. This piece just sings straight into the heart, stirring the emotions with peace and love. Love is forevermore and your write tells us so. This write has that WOW! factor Andrea. You sing with such gentleness. This has to be a seven and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX

Scott Thirtyseven May 13, 2017 at 10:27 AM Oh yeah and keeping it going forever is just something else. To all the lovers out here... Love your work Andrea

Maurice Yvonne May 11, 2017 at 7:34 PM Wow, wow, wow! An absolute fav. This should be published. A perfect example of modern romantism using a strict form 'Ottava rima'! I wish I had written this gorgeous expression of a particular love. Just Excellent!

Carol B. May 10, 2017 at 7:51 PM No feeling quite like the heart fluttering feeling we get when we first fall in love. I so love your romantic write :)

Phyllis Babcock May 10, 2017 at 4:48 PM Sweet romantic love. I am such a romantic at heart so love this poem. love phyl

Eve Roper May 9, 2017 at 7:27 PM Love it good luck in the contest hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong May 9, 2017 at 3:46 PM Ahh, love sweet love! Very beautiful. Andrea! 7 ; )

Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 2:41 PM - A beautiful poem, Andrea - Love sweet Love are glowing :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud May 9, 2017 at 1:32 PM andie, your poetic cup overflows... your romantic side becomes you, whoo... huggs

Charlie Smith May 9, 2017 at 1:16 PM Nothing like it Andrea, well done and best wishes...

Supraja Kannan May 9, 2017 at 10:25 AM This is beautiful Andrea... Loved the flow, imagery, words and everything in this verse... Thanks for sharing... A big 7...

John Michaels May 9, 2017 at 2:54 AM Lovely write, Andrea. Good luck with the contest. Regards, John.

Darren White May 9, 2017 at 12:32 AM That Ottava Rima flows over with love and smiles, and I like it a lot. Good luck in the contest!

Arthur Vaso May 8, 2017 at 10:47 PM I somehow think poetry in some way does just that! loved this!

Joseph May May 8, 2017 at 9:47 PM Aah..the blooms of love..Beautiful write Andrea

Akkina Downing May 8, 2017 at 6:37 PM A flow of joy when that sweet feeling sugar bloom so wonderfully beautiful... Very romantic, Andrea and best of luck in the contest! Hugs :)

Ilene Bauer May 8, 2017 at 5:53 PM beautiful, andrea! so well written...

Tim Smith May 8, 2017 at 5:35 PM You are an a romantic roll... incredible Andrea

Jan Allison May 8, 2017 at 5:28 PM Oh how romantic Andrea... let's hope we have a good few more years to share with our hubbies:-) hugs Jan xx Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2017 at 5:52 PM who said anything about hubbie? I'm trying to be romantic here. hahaha.

Dean Wood May 8, 2017 at 5:21 PM Lovely! A seven from me Andrea. Good luck with the contest.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 8, 2017 at 3:56 PM Amen! ;) fab pen Andrea! Good luck in the contest xomo