Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Kyrielle

With Jesus, No Mark of Cain

Out of my league, that's how you are
Still my foolish heart saw you a par
To your proposed love, I did not refrain
I will be happier, once I fall in love again

Far cry the laws, we tried and go beyond
We're happy and giddy yet all gone wrong
To people around, I've been a mark of Cain
I will be happier, once I fall in love again

I shared my time, my heart and my life..
But you, YOU rife all nothing but strife
No words can explain the pain that reign
I will be happier, once I fall in love again

I am scared, so afraid to show all reasons
Thus, I cling... cling tightly unto my Jesus
With this, I sustained. New strength I gain
I will be happier, once I fall in love again

by
Olive Eloisa
1:32 am
April 04,2014
________________________Thank You... Jesus.. :)


Contest Name:	HELPLESS, A KYRIELLE (WITH CO SPONSOR TIM RYERSON)
Sponsor:	        Cyndi MacMillan
7th place.. to God be the greatest glory.. :)

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Poet Destroyer A June 10, 2014 at 4:10 PM No Problem, Olive... I enjoy the contest list page...Linda

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2014 at 9:58 AM Olive, Congratulations, on your win in Cyndi's "HELPLESS, KYRIELLE CONTEST." take care -LINDA- Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:15 PM Thank you so much LInda.. :) hugs tc too.. :)

Tim Ryerson June 8, 2014 at 3:12 PM Oh yes indeed...Thank you Jesus! Thank you for Olive Eloisa Guillermo and this wonderful and inspiring she has written. Bless her and keep her cradled in Your mighty and loving arms...Congratulations - Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 8, 2014 at 6:17 PM Thank you Tim ..:) I'm touched with your prayer and thoughtfulness.. God bless you too.. Thanks again..:) Tim Ryerson June 8, 2014 at 3:15 PM PS: You WILL love and BE loved again!

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2014 at 9:53 PM I love the refrain line you came up with for this one, Olive. What a unique kyrielle. congrats on your win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 7, 2014 at 4:04 AM Thank you very much Andrea.. :) really appreciate your comments.. :) they are noted.. :) and kudos as well.. :D

Dr.Ram Mehta June 5, 2014 at 2:23 AM Perfect Kyrielle with apt take on the theme, congrats on a fine win, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 7, 2014 at 4:03 AM Thank you Dr. Ram.. :) really appreciate it.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 4, 2014 at 10:58 PM Great work Olive ! rhymes so well wid my heart too ,, congrats on win dear ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 7, 2014 at 4:01 AM of thanks DR. Uma hope I did not pull so much.. :) GOd bless you.. :)

Cyndi Macmillan June 4, 2014 at 6:23 PM Congratulations on your win, Olive. A sad write which shows a helplessness we all feel when love meets obstacles and a relationship which may have been, can NOT be. Time heals much. I am glad that your faith sustains you and brings you comfort. Cyndi Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 7, 2014 at 4:00 AM yes Cyndi for the faith I have.. :) yes it is. :) and never He did fail me.. :)

Faye Gibson June 4, 2014 at 4:02 PM Congratulations, Olive, on this wonderful win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 7, 2014 at 3:59 AM Thank you Faye.. :)

Gwendolen Song May 20, 2014 at 6:23 AM It's those poems that we write in the weee hours of the night that are often the most heartfelt as we pour out our raw emotions in rhyme..Great to see you revealing your inner strength and reliance on our Lord Jesus. ") Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 20, 2014 at 4:07 PM I need to dear :)

Paul Callus April 24, 2014 at 1:40 PM Hi Olive_eloi :) Very heartfelt.....the line "To people around, I had been a mark of cain" makes me realize what you are referring to. Stand up for yourself and be strong. Your faith will give you wings :) // paul Paul Callus June 4, 2014 at 12:14 PM ...congratulations on your fine placing :)) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 18, 2014 at 4:16 PM each time i read this can't help the flashback and sometimes I'm overwhelmed of how I had been blessed.. :) and yesYES that faith keep me through... Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 8, 2014 at 4:17 AM thanks so much Paul.. :) I did stand up :) and let them see who I am.. :)