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With Jaundiced Eye

With jaundiced eye affected by my heart
I do pray for enlightened vision glow
radiating truth of Scriptures’ rampart
toward perspective against falsehood blow.

Confessing personal biases’ blight
with jaundiced eye affected by my heart
I seek God’s pardon from arrogance-delight
gripped by hypocrisy and conceit’s dart.

Aware of preference right from the start
I do admit own vested interest
with jaundiced eye affected by my heart
thus, trusting the Lord’s guidance is still best.

Respecting others through Christ’s love in view
my spirit reaches out for grace impart 
resolved never to wear empathy shoe
with jaundiced eye* affected by my heart.

*Psalm 88:9 Mine eye mourneth by reason of affliction: LORD, I have called daily upon thee, I have stretched out my hands unto thee.

June 22, 2021
Edited on July 11, 2021
1st place, "A Brian Strand July 13" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 7/12/2021.
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Kendrick Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 4:03 AM
Creative writing and as always your faith is presented with your work. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Alex Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 11:34 PM
Respecting others through Christ’s love in view my spirit reaches out for grace impart resolved never to wear empathy shoe with jaundiced eye affected by my heart. Beautiful. Congratulations!
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:46 AM
Beautiful way of looking at it, Beata, yeah, we all truly need God's guidance in this life:)
Legros Kelley Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 12:47 AM
This is amazing, written so passionately and articulated so well! The scripture perfectly solidifies our ever reaching out for His healing and deliverance. Simply beautiful Beata! <3
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 4:22 AM
Wonderful write! Really liked how you put a perfect qoute from scriptures at the bottom. All the best for contest. Have a wonderful day ahead friend.
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