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With Heart Still Heavy

"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart)I am never without it"
                                                     Quote _ by E.E. Cummings



Dearest Dad, I've since clawed my way out of the doldrums 
Of grief, since I lost you to heaven moons ago; you'll always be
In my heart and on my mind until I take my last breath.


                     {Lost To Heaven - My Father}


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Writing Challenge – In My Heart – S Forms” Poetry Contest   
Sponsored by Constance La France
Date written: 09/03/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 4:40 AM
I can feel the close relationship that you had with your father. I can relate to your loss. I hope as time goes on only pleasant memories remain. Congratulations on this work being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara
La France Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 9:17 AM
Edward, a wonderful Sijo and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - In My Heart - "S" Forms, I know the pain of losing a father, Constance
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