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With Fingers Crossed Poetry Contest
Sponsor Edward Ibeh
Contest Winner Medal1st Place

ONCE UPON A TIME watercolor by Anaya

With Fingers Crossed

In love, too callow too young, broken apart by life’s torn and tortured terrain. Hearts beat in unison, will they be together again, fingers crossed—Poet


With fingers crossed,
confessions contorted seep lovely lies
spun timidity of untruth, vapid daunting denials
tussles tossed into love’s requited ring,
an aching hollowness when tender love leaves, 
one will feel its brutal sting
Bestial bees swarm sweet honeycomb,
creatures lost in their pollinated pull of habitual humility 
Ere serendipitous magic surrenders sparks
bated breath abides  a quiet ache,
as shadows descend the psyche predicts, 
a hallowed death, silence bends
With both, fingers crossed and with bated breath,
gestures still swollen in mouths of babes profuse
thus far never dies, only forgetful subterfuge
silenced sentimental souls, one departs
the other collapses, awaits with anticipation
against a waning world with holes in hearts
Echoes of past linger, an anxious expectation
a sacred secret within its power, an empirical upshot
pushed and pulled, swayed from an earlier them
The pull wins every time, more than ever they give in
telling of a palm reader
time p a s t
              times f u t u r e
 summoning, so be it’s
the time 
              i n b e t w e e n
a still point 
              of an apex u n s e e n
is the flame still there or
an illusion playing over time again
They say one must be thinking of the other
if a magical moment recurring 
sweeps a promising prism, the scent of their skin,
a moments cabaret, never-end, ceases life sojourn
That our travels shall come full circle
two ships amongst fleets of stars
hearts the same find their way once more,
never swimming to another’s shore
destiny’s doom or divine decree,       
embraced with open arms should be
what was the purest of love’s charms
Both wished upon the same star 
unfeigned heads held high
they set each other apart
beckoning back from start
spirits unwavering in resolve
on this long night of dimming hope,
venture towards aurora dawning bright
warm and welcoming~
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Alex Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 11:10 PM
"time p a s t times f u t u r e summoning, so be it’s the time i n b e t w e e n a still point of an apex u n s e e n" - A very beautiful and powerful poem.
Anaya Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 8:27 AM
Fate calls & awaits, there is more, we hiked just about every canyon our landmarks have to offer, yet there is still summits to explore. It was a thought~ ty, Christa! May blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 7:03 PM
Very nice! Congrats!
Anaya Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 7:09 PM
Ty, Kim!
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:16 PM
Spectacular penning, Anaya. One of my favorites, for sure. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest. Faved.
Anaya Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 5:58 PM
Ty, Edward I'm pleased you enjoyed, looking forward to your contests , and your poems. Warm wishes :)
Neumann Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 10:41 AM
This really speaks to me. Had a rough time recently with an unwanted divorce. Yet love is abound. Kind wishes, Kai
Anaya Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 2:11 PM
Kai, thank you for your kind words. We let our own spiritual journey take way, a day at a time, and there it comes before long the serendipitous, the openness of the universe’s gifts! Get out there~ Good luck and May blessings
Hind Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:16 PM
so many emotions, it's impossible to say everything I feel- b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l-
Anaya Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 12:47 PM
Paige an impact that makes me fe*el beau*tiful ¡loveit! Thank you
Rolland Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 3:23 PM
this is so sweet and enjoyable to share hope and "longing" poetry, thanks poet
Anaya Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:03 PM
Yann, heartfelt thank you! Blessings as usual
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