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Free Verse/With Fingers Crossed
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1818-740-26-26
All Rights, Constance La France
Infringement by Plagiarism is prohibited.

Penned, April 26, 2026/ Human Written
For the International Contest, This or That, Vol. 38
Sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 04/14/26

FIRST PLACE

With Fingers Crossed



"It is hard to fail, but it is worse never to have tried to succeed." Quote by_ Theodore Roosevelt
I stand with fingers crossed tightly. Will today be better ? I do try very hard each new day, but, I always fail . . . God, can you not see the tears that I weep? Yet, I feel a fire within me telling me to try, in a different way. To keep moving forward and never dwell in regrets let yesterdays flutter away, live in moments, on the journey. And if I should fail, begin again with fingers crossed ! Oh, so many hidden layers, too many tosses and turns, so many mistakes made, high mountains to climb ~ Why even bother ? But, a voice inside me says keep trying. Is that you God . . . speaking ? I was shattered when my dad passed away - h e a r t b r o k e n and when mom went also I was lost in myself. Like a balloon floating and drifting in the blue sky . . . with no anchor to hold me down. But, mom whispered from death I made you strong and brave daughter ! Let life unfold, float on earth's endless waves, start a new page, find your voice and purpose, accept that life changes, passes. Always seek that fire . . . burning deep within ~ and keep trying with fingers crossed !
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Miller Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 3:12 AM
Beautiful poem Constance, congratulations
Alex Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 11:12 PM
"Let life unfold, float on earth's endless waves, start a new page" - Very beautiful lines. A grand poem. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 7:06 PM
Lovely that a mother can still speak after she’s passed on. My friend’s husband died last month leaving her with the sign he gave her which says, Relax. Bless you and Congrats!
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:23 PM
Powerful, incredibly moving and inspirational, Constance. One of your finest poems I've read in a while. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
Croft Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 6:55 AM
Congratulations on your win! A beautiful poem with deep thoughts of your parents.
Gibbons Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 4:27 AM
Beautifully written with passion from your heart. I loved the song music is a great healer I do believe. Music is my passion. Your writing and song inspired me so much. Thank you for writing such emotionally deep. Today is the day my Grandmother passed away 40 odd years ago I was truly blessed to have her in my life still she's with me in my heart. Hugs
La France Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 10:26 AM
Dorothy, thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. I loved my grandma too! She passed at 93. She is the reason I am a writer, inspiring me to take this journey, gave me ... my first journal and pen, read everything I wrote. Listened to me read my poems with pride, then, in the end I wrote her Eulogy~
Parker Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 5:09 AM
The times of life are expressed from one's heart, written down from each passing day, it is a lonely journey we all must take while facing forward but still connected to the shadows that cling to our steps, these shadows never leave yet grow shorter as our day grows longer, my first thoughts after reading your poem Constance
La France Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 6:34 AM
Frederic, thank you for your wonderful message, appreciate. When my parents left this world I felt broken. Life has been a beautiful though at times difficult journey~
Parker Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 11:09 AM
Constance, this song touched me deeply, thank you for posting it, Beautiful in its wisdom...I can't wait for your poem; you have such a deep well of emotion to use...Frederic
La France Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 12:17 PM
Frederic, thank you for the comment and compliment Yes the song is so meaningful, I am hoping the poem will be too, just need some time to pen it ~
Rodrigues Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 6:46 PM
Beautiful song, Constance. Meaningful.
La France Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 4:20 AM
Kim, thank you, I really am inspired by this song. The poem is going to take time to write but I will work on it slowly~
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