Susan Ashley Poet Rhyme

With Finespun Fingers

With finespun fingers of silky words
brushed with passionate warmth cashmere,
fill my pillow here with your lush and luscious thoughts
so my starry-eyes may wander hushed sighs, as mere
sleepy sweet nothings whisper flushed forget-me-nots.

Dress my dreams agleam your soft sterling tiffany,
upon moonbeams of cream chiffon fly your mused rapture
in glimmers; so shimmers swooned stream’s epiphany
of silky words cashmere - dream’s cocoon you capture.


Susan Ashley 
November 24, 2017


~ Fifth Place ~
Premiere Contest: Early Feb. 2018 
Sponsor: Brian Strand


Poet’s note; In honor of my friendship with the wonderful and talented poet, Paul Callus, I would like to express my heartfelt appreciation. His lovely response to my comment on his beautiful poem 'Whispers of Love' lit the fuse to my muse, inspiring this poem...

Thank you, my dear friend Paul,
your artistry inspirits me.

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Gershon Wolf July 30, 2021 at 8:25 AM This is featured on the P.S. Home Page this week. You posted it in Nov., 2017, a month before I first posted on the Soup, but I know, Susan -- in my heart of hearts -- that every line of this poem was meant for me. So clear, that. ~ Just braggin' a bit. :) Bitsy Wolf Susan Ashley August 10, 2021 at 7:40 AM My dearest endearing Bitsy Wolf, how is it that you know me so well.. from before we even knew each other? Lol! Your talents truly do amaze me hehe! Of course, every line of this poem was meant for you ;) Go ahead and brag all you want! I'm glad it's all out in the open now haha! Please accept my apologies for my late reply, life is keeping me too busy these days to properly enjoy my Soup :) Warmest wishes, braggin' Bitsy.. ~Susan

Mahtab Bangalee July 28, 2021 at 11:45 PM great tribute Susan Ashley August 10, 2021 at 7:16 AM Thank you for your gracious visit and and wonderful comment, Mahtab. Please accept my apologies for my late reply, life is keeping me too busy these days to properly enjoy my Soup :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

John Watt October 3, 2020 at 9:27 PM Enjoyed reading your excerpt just now, and to see the genesis of it is a double treat! I see from your writer's note that you were inspired by the wonderful poet Paul; what a great way to 'light the fuse to your muse'. An amazing tribute. Your analogy of softness with pillows, cashmere, silky, chiffon, forget-me-nots, all contribute to a dreamlike trance, like falling asleep in a field of poppies. I like 'lush and luscious', one of many sensual and sensational phrases. Well done, poetess! ~ John Susan Ashley October 4, 2020 at 6:54 PM John, your lush and luscious comments fill me with joy! Thank you for your sweet visit here to the original poem from which my excerpt was taken. Indeed, Paul is wonderfully inspiring.. to think that this poem was sparked from a comment I left on his poem "Whispers Of Love" -shows just how precious poetic friendships are. The light of your friendship shines upon me, John, and I gratefully bask in its glow, and I reflect the light of friendship back upon you. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Joseph P. DiMino March 7, 2018 at 4:38 AM You have a rare understanding of words and the atmosphere they create. This can only come from an honest heart's life experience. Some folks become hardened, having been hurt beyond bravery. And some folks, forgive... and, therefore, have learned to love more deeply. I think you are the positive latter. Great writing!! Susan Ashley March 7, 2018 at 8:18 PM Joe, you are such a kindhearted and sensitive soul. Thank you for your most beautiful expression of deep insight.. I truly believe in and practice the gift of forgiveness for myself and others and I agree that the result is the ability to love more deeply. That you are this aware gives me the feeling that you practice and believe in forgiveness too and that your well of love must run deep also.. Thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me. Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan

Gregory Richard Barden February 15, 2018 at 10:22 PM Gorgeous, gorgeous write, Susan, and such a heartfelt and charming tribute ... congrats and blessings, my friend! Love this expressive and fluid write! :-) <3 Susan Ashley February 16, 2018 at 6:29 PM Thank you Gregory for your beautiful comments and for sharing your treasured thoughts with me. Your lovely words are held in deep appreciation and mean so much to me since I hold your poetic talent in such high regard. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Warmest wishes always. ~Susan

Subimal Sinha-Roy February 5, 2018 at 12:34 AM Congratulations, Susan on your fine win. Susan Ashley February 5, 2018 at 5:30 PM Thank you for your kindhearted sentiments, Subimal. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Sandra Haight February 4, 2018 at 4:57 PM So lovely, Susan...I agree with Line...candy for the ears! Congratulations on your wonderful placement in this Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra Susan Ashley February 4, 2018 at 10:04 PM Thank you Sandra for your heartwarming comments and wonderful congrats. Your lovely kindness is deeply appreciated. Warmest wishes... ~Susan

Line Gauthier February 4, 2018 at 1:12 PM OMG Susan, ear candy! A definite FAVE for me. Susan Ashley February 4, 2018 at 4:39 PM Thank you Line for your awesome comment and for the fave! I treasure your lovely thoughts and your visits are always such a delight. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Dale Gregory Cozart February 4, 2018 at 11:37 AM Good write, Susan. Congrats on your placement. Susan Ashley February 4, 2018 at 11:42 AM Thank you Dale for your kindhearted words and warm congrats. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Lewis Raynes January 28, 2018 at 9:53 PM such a soft and beautiful write here Susan, i like this one heaps Susan Ashley January 28, 2018 at 10:07 PM Thank you Lewis for your lovely comments. I'm so pleased that you like it as it has to do with something we cherish - sweet dreams.. Thank you for delight of your visit. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Gary Smith January 6, 2018 at 5:53 PM Just a pleasure to read Susan :) Susan Ashley January 6, 2018 at 6:22 PM Thank you, Gray for your lovely comments. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Probir Gupta December 5, 2017 at 6:11 AM Silky soft tribute ... petals of rose held by green sepals ... a festival of your wordsmithery ... Great, Susan ... Susan Ashley December 5, 2017 at 4:23 PM ohh Probir, such a breathtakingly beautiful comment. I love every lovely poetic word of appreciation expressed. Your precious thoughts are received with my heartfelt gratitude. 'petals of rose held by green sepals' - quite possibly that most beautiful words I've ever received in a comment for a poem. Thank you my talented friend for your wondrous words and the smile you gave me. Warmest wishes.~Susan

Jan Allison December 3, 2017 at 4:50 PM Dropping back again to read these wonderful words and add the poem to my faves:-) I've had the pleasure of meeting Paul on several occasions and am sure we will talk about this little gem next time we meet:-) hugs jan xx Susan Ashley December 3, 2017 at 9:33 PM Ohh Jan, that's so nice to know that you've had the pleasure of meeting Paul. How nice that is for you both. Thank you for sharing that with me. Thank you also for dropping back again with your kind words and for the fave. Your lovely gesture is received with deep appreciation. Hugs and warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Chris Hagy December 2, 2017 at 7:04 PM This one certainly "captures" the reader and swoons them away! :) nice honor to Paul too... another great weaver of words. Have nice day :) Susan Ashley December 3, 2017 at 11:37 AM Chris, thank you for your thoughtful and beautiful comment. Yes, Paul does weave wondrous words with golden thread :) Your wonderful words and treasured thoughts are so appreciated. I believe this is the first time we've crossed paths and I'm pleased to meet you. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Harry Horsman December 2, 2017 at 6:03 PM Such weaving of words to captivate one's senses, love your wondrous poetry Susan Ashley December 2, 2017 at 10:46 PM Harry, that you enjoyed my poem means so much to me. Thank you for your lovely comment and your wonderful visit. You're welcome to my poetry pages always.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Ralph Sergi December 2, 2017 at 2:01 PM Hi Susan: Your poem shimmers in the moonlight. my compliments! Susan Ashley December 2, 2017 at 10:44 PM Thank you Ralph. Your wonderful visit and lovely sentiments are heartwarming and appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Charlie Smith December 2, 2017 at 10:27 AM What a soft and soothing write Susan, lovely work... Susan Ashley December 2, 2017 at 10:19 PM Charlie, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Your wonderful visit and comment are so appreciated. Thank you my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2017 at 9:38 AM I love how you dream, Susan! This poem is packed w/so much romantic imagery, a heart could fly a long time on those gossamer dreams. Splendid poetry. Love and joy always. Susan Ashley December 2, 2017 at 10:18 PM Freddie, thank you for your awesome sentiments. That you enjoyed my poem pleases me and your response was pretty poetic as well 'a heart could fly a long time on those gossamer dreams' - that line is so graceful and lovely and so is your presence on my poetry page. Hugs and my warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2017 at 7:44 AM - Oh, this is really beautiful Susan - Beautiful silk soft lines, like beads of dew drops - Paul is a man with beautiful words both in poem and comment, deserves the best - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Susan Ashley December 2, 2017 at 6:14 PM Anne-Lise, thank you for your heartwarming comment. I totally agree with your sentiments regarding our friend Paul.. Your wonderful words and visit are so appreciated my friend. Warmest wishes for a wonderful weekend to you as well.. ~Susan

Joseph May November 30, 2017 at 7:43 AM Sensual and elegant..Beautifully woven Susan Susan Ashley November 30, 2017 at 8:47 PM Joseph, your precious thoughts are appreciated as is your delightful presence on my poetry page. Thank you for kind visit and truly lovely comment. My warmest wishes to you my friend.. ~Susan

Arthur Vaso November 30, 2017 at 3:00 AM Beautiful words for a poet who is very very kind, I am sure he truly loved this! Susan Ashley November 30, 2017 at 8:37 PM arthur, your treasured thoughts are truly appreciated and I agree that Paul is very very kind. Thank you for your wonderful comment, your always a delightful presence on my poetry page. My warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Eve Roper November 29, 2017 at 9:32 PM Awe, you pick a wonderful man to honor, Susan.great poem. Susan Ashley November 30, 2017 at 8:33 PM Eve, thank you or your treasured thoughts and I agree that Paul is a wonderful man. Your kind visit and wonderful comment is warmly appreciated. My very best wishes to you.. ~Susan

Demetrios Trifiatis November 29, 2017 at 4:22 AM Paul is a wonderful Man and Poet. His poems always are inspiring! Here I see you have performed miracles with his inspiration dear Susan! Marvelous poem! Susan Ashley November 29, 2017 at 7:28 PM Demetrios, your delightful words are music to my ears. Thank you for your kind visit and for sharing your wonderful thoughts. Your insight is always appreciated.. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Connie Marcum Wong November 29, 2017 at 2:34 AM Inspiration is evident in this beautiful piece Susan! I am also an admirer of Pauls poetry. ; ) Susan Ashley November 29, 2017 at 7:32 PM Thank you for your kind visit and lovely comment Connie. I'm sure that we're just two of many admirer of Paul's beautiful poetry but I relish having that in common with you. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux November 27, 2017 at 6:29 PM This is filled with texture. A lovely use of language. Susan Ashley November 27, 2017 at 7:31 PM Richard, your wonderful comment warms my heart.. Thank you for your lovely visit and your encouraging words, they are gratefully received. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

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