With Eyes Shut

My eyes feel heavy..
Eyelids weigh a ton
Like a ton of bricks
No longer shall they remain open..
They are now closed..

With eyes shut..
I can see magnificent colors
Beautiful vivid colors are before me..
So clear..
So bold..
Colors are breathtaking..
As they are unique..
These colors I have not seen in existence..
With eyes open..

With eyes shut..
Vivid, unique, bold, colors appear..
These colors are floating everywhere
They are in communication..

Deepening focus..
In a deep, hypnotic, alpha state..
All is now..

I and...
The magnificent colors
The grandest of auras
Expressive and colorful..

Colorful auras..
Becoming symbols
Becoming forms
People, places, and things..
Surrounds..
My focus is..
Which is that..
Which is..
Out of time and space..

Where time is of no significance..
Time is not in sequence
Followed by..
And followed by..
No orders apply..

Time is unconventional..
Time is simultaneous..
Everything in existence is in the present..
Now..
Now it is..

Past is now..
Future is now
With my eyes shut..
I can reach out to past
The past is now..
With my eyes shut..
I can reach out to future..
There is no space and time
The future is now..
I have envisioned this..
I have become this..
In all of its glory
In all of its grace..

I have witnessed divinity..
Full fledged
full of grace..
Full of bliss..

In a state of becoming..
I am..
All divinity..
It is..
I am..
All..

With my eyes shut..

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Date: 4/16/2018 3:32:00 AM
LOVE THIS POEM! All of it. "Where time is of no significance.. Time is not in sequence Followed by.. And followed by.. No orders apply" - / "The Past is Now.."
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Robertina B.
Date: 4/16/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback Leanne !!! Greatly appreciated!!!!
Date: 4/15/2018 8:09:00 PM
I like to come back and re-read certain special poems, poems that speak to the soul. This is definitely one of them. Simply marvelous, Robertina. Keep on spinning the magic! :) Gershon
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Robertina B.
Date: 4/15/2018 9:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for visiting, Gershon!!!! You really made my night magical with your kind words..
Date: 4/11/2018 6:09:00 AM
- Sounds beautiful with eyes closed, Robertina - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/10/2018 9:39:00 PM
Magnificent poem, Robertina. Bravo.
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Date: 4/10/2018 7:27:00 PM
Wow! What an imaginative, innovative write, Robertina! So deeply felt---with all of that feeling conveyed to the reader (me). This is a jewel. ~Gershon
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Date: 4/10/2018 6:12:00 PM
Your poem struck a chord with me, I have seen such amazing colours when I've had distance reiki healing after I had a breast lump removed in January, but also with hands on healing many years ago when the intense purple was so vivid it is something I'll never forget:-) beautifully penned Robertina:-) hugs jan xx
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Robertina B.
Date: 4/10/2018 7:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit, Jan!! Very kind words.. I totally can relate.. I had several mystical experiences with vivid colors.. Was incredible!! Stay blessed Jan!! Sending positive energy your way...
Date: 4/10/2018 5:16:00 PM
At times we see more clearly when we see nothing at all. Beautiful Robertina.
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FJ Thomas
Date: 4/10/2018 7:16:00 PM
Thanks Me Lady ;)
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/10/2018 6:12:00 PM
I love that line Flo:-) hugs jan xx
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Robertina B.
Date: 4/10/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words, FJ !!!! I really appreciate it..
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Robertina B.
Date: 4/10/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words, FJ !!!! I really appreciate it..
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