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With Christmas

With Christmas Comes the soft snow The roasted chestnut The starry glow In the eyes Of the ones who are loved With Christmas Comes the mistletoe The soft pink lips The Cupid's bow That melts into The souls of the lovers With Christmas Comes the sound of love The sound underground The sound above Which jingles ever so lightly And which I am deaf to With Christmas Comes the memory of you Your light red nose The faded pink hue On your upper cheeks From walking in the cold With Christmas Returns the ghost of time When you said you had to leave And I said it was fine But really I was hiding What I was feeling inside Couldn't you tell that I wasn't fine?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/15/2015 11:35:00 PM
you are welcome... ((regarding the bottom reply))
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Date: 1/11/2015 10:08:00 PM
Paakhi,, Congratulations on your Christmas Daze win, Love ~LINDA~
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Paakhi Bhatnagar
Date: 1/12/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thank you, Linda.
Date: 1/9/2015 7:14:00 PM
This poem provokes the reader's senses in many ways. It is beautiful, and yet so sad... Really great work! Congrats on the win!
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Paakhi Bhatnagar
Date: 1/10/2015 12:39:00 AM
Thank You so much, Kelly. That really means a lot.
Date: 1/9/2015 6:19:00 PM
beautiful imagery but hauntingly sad - many congrats on your win:-)Hugs jan xx
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Paakhi Bhatnagar
Date: 1/10/2015 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.

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