With Christmas

With Christmas
Comes the soft snow
The roasted chestnut
The starry glow
In the eyes
Of the ones who are loved

With Christmas
Comes the mistletoe
The soft pink lips
The Cupid's bow
That melts into
The souls of the lovers

With Christmas
Comes the sound of love
The sound underground
The sound above
Which jingles ever so lightly
And which I am deaf to

With Christmas
Comes the memory of you
Your light red nose
The faded pink hue
On your upper cheeks
From walking in the cold

With Christmas
Returns the ghost of time
When you said you had to leave
And I said it was fine
But really I was hiding
What I was feeling inside

Couldn't you tell that I wasn't fine?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/15/2015 11:35:00 PM
you are welcome... ((regarding the bottom reply))
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Date: 1/11/2015 10:08:00 PM
Paakhi,, Congratulations on your Christmas Daze win, Love ~LINDA~
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Paakhi Bhatnagar
Date: 1/12/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thank you, Linda.
Date: 1/9/2015 7:14:00 PM
This poem provokes the reader's senses in many ways. It is beautiful, and yet so sad... Really great work! Congrats on the win!
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Paakhi Bhatnagar
Date: 1/10/2015 12:39:00 AM
Thank You so much, Kelly. That really means a lot.
Date: 1/9/2015 6:19:00 PM
beautiful imagery but hauntingly sad - many congrats on your win:-)Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/10/2015 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.
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