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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The bristled shaft trembles alive in my grip— not wood, but lightning given form. Below, rooftops shrink into gray pebbles, the wind’s cold teeth biting my cheeks. This is not flying; it is falling upward!
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