Witching Hour

I heard her cackling, wicked with delight
Looked up to find her evil silhouette
Against the amber moon Halloween night
Seeing me below, she made a dire threat

“At midnight your teeth will fall from your head
Your thick, lustrous hair will drop to the floor
Your sight will be blocked by a veil of lead
And you won’t see your children anymore”

From my porch I ran in and slammed the door
Stowed candy away, no more trick or treat
Disappointing the kids I did abhor
But I had to lie down, get off my feet

Shivering in bed, I dreaded her curse
Felt her hazel eyes still staring at me
Waiting for the onset of things adverse
Her menacing presence chortled with glee

Clock struck twelve; I had to call it a night
So warily I removed my brown wig
I took out the dentures that felt so tight
Took off strong glasses, hoping she’d renege 


*Written August 10, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 7:06 AM
Scary and funny write on Halloween, Carolyn.
Sathasivam Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 3:40 AM
An excellent Halloween Poem. Well penned. Tfs
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 2:53 AM
... Wow ...... scary and funny - a very well written poem, Carolyn ! :) ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A. Sharma Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 10:54 PM
Superb writye Carolyn ! love the second n the last stanza the most,, good luck to u,, hv a blessed day!
Kapoor Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 10:21 PM
An excellent Halloween Poem dear friend. It is always a joy for me to read your Poetry. Love and best wishes always Carolyn...Ravindra K Kapoor
Chircop Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 10:13 PM
I reallly enjoyed reading your halloween poem..'At midnight your teeth will fall of your head' ..Really liked that : ).Excellent !!!How are you sweet Carolyn.You are too sweet.to write halliween cursed and scary poems,but.hey you really did a great job with.this eerie story.
Smith Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 9:01 PM
Absolutely fabulous Carolyn...I love Halloween....One of the best times I had was at Busch Gardens in Tampa...They have actors in character scaring people all throughout the park..I believe it runs for the two weeks leading up to Halloween....hugs Tim
Dome Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 8:12 PM
Ha ha loved it the wig and the teeth. well done. hope you won Pete.
Merritt Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 7:42 PM
What a story you've told here ! Great write, Carolyn, I read it twice. Good luck in the contest !
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