Witching Hour

I heard her cackling, wicked with delight
Looked up to find her evil silhouette
Against the amber moon Halloween night
Seeing me below, she made a dire threat

“At midnight your teeth will fall from your head
Your thick, lustrous hair will drop to the floor
Your sight will be blocked by a veil of lead
And you won’t see your children anymore”

From my porch I ran in and slammed the door
Stowed candy away, no more trick or treat
Disappointing the kids I did abhor
But I had to lie down, get off my feet

Shivering in bed, I dreaded her curse
Felt her hazel eyes still staring at me
Waiting for the onset of things adverse
Her menacing presence chortled with glee

Clock struck twelve; I had to call it a night
So warily I removed my brown wig
I took out the dentures that felt so tight
Took off strong glasses, hoping she’d renege 


*Written August 10, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/11/2014 7:06:00 AM
Scary and funny write on Halloween, Carolyn.
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Date: 8/11/2014 3:40:00 AM
An excellent Halloween Poem. Well penned. Tfs
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Date: 8/11/2014 2:53:00 AM
... Wow ...... scary and funny - a very well written poem, Carolyn ! :) ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/10/2014 10:54:00 PM
Superb writye Carolyn ! love the second n the last stanza the most,, good luck to u,, hv a blessed day!
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Date: 8/10/2014 10:21:00 PM
An excellent Halloween Poem dear friend. It is always a joy for me to read your Poetry. Love and best wishes always Carolyn...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 8/10/2014 10:13:00 PM
I reallly enjoyed reading your halloween poem..'At midnight your teeth will fall of your head' ..Really liked that : ).Excellent !!!How are you sweet Carolyn.You are too sweet.to write halliween cursed and scary poems,but.hey you really did a great job with.this eerie story.
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Date: 8/10/2014 9:01:00 PM
Absolutely fabulous Carolyn...I love Halloween....One of the best times I had was at Busch Gardens in Tampa...They have actors in character scaring people all throughout the park..I believe it runs for the two weeks leading up to Halloween....hugs Tim
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Date: 8/10/2014 8:12:00 PM
Ha ha loved it the wig and the teeth. well done. hope you won Pete.
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Date: 8/10/2014 7:42:00 PM
What a story you've told here ! Great write, Carolyn, I read it twice. Good luck in the contest !
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