Witching Hour

Awakened, in the dead of night
Seized by a feeling of fright
I struggle to catch my breath
My heart pounding in my chest

Surely my thoughts are disillusioned
Glimpsing a shadow translucent
I say to myself with nervous snicker
The drowsy mind is a trickster

Over my head, I pull the blanket
Suddenly something grabs my ankle
Upright I sit in utter horror
Praying I live to see tomorrow

The sounds of scratching echoes
A screeching laugh bellows
The stench of rotting flesh lingers
Down my arm moves icy fingers

Have mercy on my worthless soul
The clock chimes it's immortal toll
The time of hour, I could foresee 
Every night at a quarter past three.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/3/2021 9:29:00 AM
Wow Darlene this is soooooooo good. I love the build up, and it is so creative, scary and beautiful all wrapped up together. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/24/2018 2:16:00 PM
Chilling...A great Halloween poem; very scary situation there. Great piece of work.
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Date: 10/22/2018 12:23:00 PM
It's the beginning of the witching hour...nice build up and ending...All the best Darlene
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