Witche's Picnic

Suddenly, a vapid, rainy chill
Gives rise to woodsy fungal growth.
Make a potion large enough to fill
A cauldron, or grate pot, or both.

Tomorrow night brings us Hallowe'en.
On this night we will meet in nature.
Invisible, we'll gather here unseen.
Beware you ghosts, your spirits we may capture.

He-he, he-he. See the waxing moon?
We'll  recall the clouds and bring back gloom.
He-he,he-he. We'll serve this food from our cauldron's spoon,
And then we'll eat this feast by Philton's tomb.

And to mortals entering our space,
If you feel a vapid, haunting chill,
Please understand we only ask for grace.
Our seance group won't return until
The mushrooms grow again in woodsy place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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May Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 4:32 AM
I enjoyed your verse. Very nicely crafted
Greenhough Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 7:38 AM
Thank you.
Buehler Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 10:20 PM
Dark and very entertaining, your poem has thrills and chills, Hilda. Great imagery! :)
Greenhough Avatar
February 13, 2026 at 7:52 AM
Thank you. Halloween is always chilling.
Hamilton Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 1:10 PM
enchanting poem Hilda just right for Halloween hugs Shadow
Greenhough Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 1:48 PM
Thank you. Halloween is always fun.
Crandall Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:05 PM
Fun poem, I would like to have a nice hot cauldron with tasty mushrooms.
Greenhough Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 6:48 PM
I agree. There's nothing better than a bowl of fungus. Nice to hear from you.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 2:14 AM
Hi Hilda, this poem is quite haunting. I love dark poems.
Greenhough Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 5:49 AM
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for your visit.
George Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 9:32 PM
I sense a terrible chill. Though Halloween is over, I feel the ghosts are around.... Lol. Quite spooky.
George Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 4:00 AM
No, Halloween is not celebrated in a national level. I am sure some here and there may be celebrating it
Greenhough Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:09 AM
Thank you. I hope you had a fun Halloween. Do you celebrate it in India?
Bayles Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 3:18 PM
Nice, haunted poem.
Greenhough Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 4:20 PM
Thank you for your comment. Happy Halloween to you.
Delegans Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 5:54 PM
Had fun reading this one. It is the season! Thanks for sharing this with us. Hilda.
Greenhough Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 6:08 PM
Thank you. I am in a Halloween mood. I've been watching Haunt T.V. to scare myself. I hope your Halloween is fun.
Poet Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:11 AM
May your words serve as a balm for the soul. Exquisitely crafted narrative verse, Hilda. It conjured the witches into existence before my very eyes. Yet this brings joy to the witches.
Greenhough Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:26 AM
It is a rhyme, like mother goose.
Canerdy Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Very well-written narrative poem, Hilda. Janice
Greenhough Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Thank you. Though listed as such, a narrative does not have rhyming content and is not a poem. It is a story. New Age tries to change facts. Everyone should have an old dictionary. AI is not a good source.
Singh Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Enjoyed reading the poem.
Greenhough Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 5:34 AM
I'm glad you liked it.
Jones Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 2:49 AM
A festive one! Great fun to read!
Greenhough Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 5:33 AM
Thank you. I try to write at least one each year for Halloween.
Loving Iii Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 3:06 PM
Seasonal. Have you seen "Weapons" recently in theaters. It brought witches to life for me. But this makes witches happy.
Greenhough Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 9:57 PM
I haven't seen Weapons. It sounds interesting.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 3:33 PM
Well done story.
Greenhough Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 6:00 PM
Thank you.
Wolf Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 8:34 PM
Which day will that be?
Greenhough Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 9:40 PM
It's always Oct. 31, eve of Day of the Dead. This poem is not written for actual time.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 5:40 PM
clever and entertaining poem, Hilda. I especially liked these lines: And to mortals entering our space, If you feel a vapid, haunting chill, Please understand we only ask for grace. Made me smile :-)
Greenhough Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Thank you. I thought those lines were witchy too. Halloween isn't too far away. Maybe I'll have time to write another.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 1:37 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. We do not do Halloween. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Greenhough Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 1:53 PM
As a youngster. I did Halloween every year for the free candy. Yep, I was a mercenary. I'll wish you a Happy Last of Octber Days instead of Halloween.
Gifford Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 12:56 PM
Hello Hilda, this is an excellent spooky Halloween write and an enjoyable read. Stay blessed, my friend.
Greenhough Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 1:12 PM
Poor witches. Just one day a year. Thank you for your comment.
Rodgers Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Dear Hilda, you’ve conjured a world where the veil thins and laughter echoes off tombstones, and I’m absolutely here for it. The “He-he, he-he” refrain is delightful because it dances between whimsy and warning, like a witch’s giggle in the wind. I’ll bring my cloak and a spoon. With spooky delight, Autumn Blessings, Dear Hilda, Daniel
Greenhough Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 1:11 PM
Thank you very much. You've uplifted my 'spirit'.
Hamilton Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 9:53 AM
this is an excellent take Halloween Hilda I love it Hugs Shadow
Greenhough Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 9:58 AM
Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 7:53 AM
- ... I beg for mercy ... on this scary evening, Hilda :) - Great written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Greenhough Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 8:12 AM
Thank you for commenting. I wrote this as my Halloween poem. I didn't enter a contest but good luck if you did.
May Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 7:25 AM
A witch's brew that brings a chill, I enjoyed the read
Greenhough Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 7:30 AM
Thank you. Halloween has always been fun for me..enjoy the lovely October days ahead.
Greenhough Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 3:30 PM
Hilda Greenhough Witche's Picnic. 10/12/25
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