Witch Wind

Was it from North, clear and cold,
or South, dark and threatening rain,
from East which drives the fishes deep,
or fair West to bring them back again?

From whim of mystic forces
or differential heating giving rise
to local pressure variances
moving air between our skies?

The lightest zephyr may have  
brought us together
yet  not even a hurricane
can tear us apart.

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A  tribute to the Anemoi

1/1/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 2, 2015 at 10:55 AM
It's a good poem, a little closer to what I was looking for in my contest. I suppose you wrote me because, you read I had troubles with my contest. Thank you for that Dave. With your permission I'm having a Wind Contest (chance #2.) May I have your permission to use this as an example. Hugs
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March 7, 2017 at 9:46 AM
Rereading my comment much later and I realized it should have read "have no problem!" I hope this didn't cause a problem.
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September 2, 2015 at 5:27 PM
Hey SKAT, thanks, I'm sometimes know for being windy and have problem with you using my poem. I suspect that contests may be especially slow in the August doldrums and am sure things will pick up this month once all the kids are back at school.
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January 3, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Congrats on a fine win Dave...
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January 2, 2015 at 11:45 PM
Dave, Congrats on your win... Linda :
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January 2, 2015 at 8:03 PM
love the way you tied it all together with the winds not being able to tear us apart. So sweet. congrats for your win.
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January 2, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Thanks Andrea, all the best and continued top postings forthe New Year
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January 2, 2015 at 2:32 PM
This is a lovely poem with a great ending. Well done and congrats on your fine win, Dave. // paul
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January 2, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Thanks Paul, btw - I tend to wish big.
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January 2, 2015 at 1:07 PM
many congrats and best wishes Dave xx
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January 2, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Thanks Mandy, sending best wishes back.
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January 2, 2015 at 11:16 AM
great descriptive write - many congrats hugs jan xx
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January 2, 2015 at 5:46 PM
Thanks Jan all the best for the New Year
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January 2, 2015 at 7:42 AM
Congrats on the win and wish you all the best of 2015, dave
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January 2, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Thanks Dr. M and all eh best to you as well.
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 4:29 AM
Another pointer to your excellence, congrats Dave...huggs
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January 2, 2015 at 7:37 AM
Thanks Kaydos - not too shabby yourself
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January 2, 2015 at 2:44 AM
congrats on 3rd Dave ty for your support hugs
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January 2, 2015 at 7:36 AM
Thank you Shadow for your windy contest
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January 1, 2015 at 12:55 PM
Good little poem, Dave. :) john.
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January 1, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Thanks john
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