Caren Krutsinger Poet Monorhyme

Witch Bee Was Given One Wish

Witch Bee was given one wish. Anything at all.
She pictured a haunted house, everlastingly tall.
A replica of herself, a gruesome, gritty pretty doll.
But would she rather own her own broomstick mall?

What about a wonderful shop with wands, wall to wall?
Would she be given a medal, because of her squall?
A wonderful dog and cat sanctuary might be her call.
Undecided, she asked the wish-maker to come back in the fall.

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Kim Rodrigues October 29, 2020 at 12:44 PM Be mind full! Love your tale! Congratulations on POTD! Caren Krutsinger October 30, 2020 at 8:20 AM Thank you Kim. It was a great honor.

Alexis Y. October 17, 2020 at 2:24 AM Hi Caren, You penned a good “ halloween” monorhyme. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis Caren Krutsinger October 17, 2020 at 10:28 AM Thank you so much Alexis.

Silent One October 15, 2020 at 1:22 AM So sweet you got POTD... Congrats Caren Krutsinger October 15, 2020 at 3:53 AM Thank you my friend. It was an enormous surprise and honor.

Mark Koplin October 14, 2020 at 7:12 PM Congrats on your POTD Caren! Great job!! Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:24 PM Glad I came over here tonight to see how things went. Thank you!

Brandy Nicole October 14, 2020 at 6:47 PM Hmm, and I wonder which wish- Witch Bee will wish ?? :) She still has time to make that call. This made me smile. Cute and clever, are your thoughts. Congratulations Caren, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:25 PM Thank you Brandy

Regina Mcintosh October 14, 2020 at 2:58 PM Congrats on POTD and a wonderful write, friend. God bless you Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:25 PM Thank you Regina

Lyric Canna October 14, 2020 at 2:22 PM What a great POTD! It reminds me of a children's halloween book my mother used to read to me. Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:25 PM I love Halloween, so I am glad this resonated so well.

Constance La France October 14, 2020 at 10:43 AM Caren, congratulations on your Poem of the Day, enjoy the honor _Constance Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:26 PM Thank you Constance

Sam Kauffman October 14, 2020 at 10:19 AM Very fun! Flows so lyrically with a great conclusion, Caren. Congratulations on your POTD. Lots of fun. Harvest hugs. Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:26 PM Thank you Sam

Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2020 at 10:03 AM Congratulations on POTD win. "So Cute" My one wish would be for 10 wishes. Enjoy your win......................... Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:26 PM Thank you Paula

Eve Roper October 14, 2020 at 8:12 AM Wonderfully done Caren,Congratulations On poem of the day. Hugs Eve Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:26 PM Thank you Eve

Vijay Pandit October 14, 2020 at 7:48 AM Congrats Caren, on poem of the day. Enjoyed your creative write. Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:26 PM Thank you Vijay

Gershon Wolf October 14, 2020 at 7:46 AM Ha, ha! This is cute, Caren. Decisions, decisions. Which witch is which, anyway?! Congratulations on POTD! Happy Wednesday to you. ~ Gershon Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:27 PM Thank you Gershon Happy Wednesday back!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 14, 2020 at 6:48 AM - A bewitched Halloween bee ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Caren :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:27 PM Thank you Anne-Lise

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 14, 2020 at 6:47 AM Giggles! Enjoyed that. Congratulations on POTD dear poetess! xomo <3 Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:27 PM Thank you Maureen aka Pigeon Tart!

Arturo Michael October 14, 2020 at 6:36 AM Wonderful ...magical...Congratulations Caren on POTD...I like it Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:27 PM Thank you Arturo

Victor Buhagiar October 14, 2020 at 6:35 AM Congratulations. Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:28 PM Thank you Victor

Heidi Sands October 14, 2020 at 6:31 AM Congratulations for POTD Caren :) Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:28 PM Thank you Heidi

Anitha Jayasankar October 14, 2020 at 4:46 AM Enjoyed reading this Halloween poem.... Congrats on POTD. Love ~ Ani Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:28 PM Thank you Anitha

Ann Gilmour October 14, 2020 at 3:38 AM Many congratulations dear Caren on your POTD ~ Witch Bee scarey but lovable... thanks Caren. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:28 PM Thank you Ann

Jenna Logan October 14, 2020 at 3:37 AM She was Bee Witched! Congratulations of having potd, Caren. Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:29 PM Thank you Jenna

Jan Allison October 14, 2020 at 2:39 AM perfect Halloween poem caren,. many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:29 PM Thank you Jan

Tom Cunningham October 14, 2020 at 12:58 AM Just right for Halloween Caren, congratulations on. POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2020 at 8:29 PM Thank you Tom

Silent One October 13, 2020 at 7:31 AM You did monorhyme very well.. Hope all is well with you Caren... Caren Krutsinger October 13, 2020 at 1:09 PM Thank you Silent One.

Sand Blown October 12, 2020 at 11:46 PM ...hmmm...witchawn wish....to bee or not to bee....or....too bee or not too bee.... Caren Krutsinger October 13, 2020 at 1:09 PM Enjoyed this Stan

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