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Witch At Night

A witch on a journey at night was gripping her broomstick in fright - the batteries low, a distance to go, she wished that she'd traveled by kite! written 21st October for Tania's Halloween limerick contest (used Soup's syllable checker)

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/12/2020 5:58:00 AM

Very funny.Kind wishes, Kai

Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/14/2019 4:45:00 AM

Lol, love this! Congratulations x

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/31/2019 10:34:00 AM

Congrats, Jack. Hope I don't run into any witches tonight!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/30/2019 9:30:00 PM

Very good. Clever, funny, and clean!! Congrats, Jack, on your well-deserved winner in Tania's contest. Warm autumn wishes, Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2019 7:42:00 PM

I loved this first time I read it, many congrats Jack:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/30/2019 7:21:00 PM

Very funny! Congratulations, Jack!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/30/2019 7:07:00 PM

Jack, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest, this was very clever and fun!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2019 12:04:00 PM

GREAT job with this one too. Clever end line, Jack.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2019 3:10:00 PM

Cute one. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for all your visits. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/23/2019 11:43:00 AM

Gee, I hadn't thought of travel by kite. Will try it this year and give the kids a break from the scary costumes I usually wear. So glad Halloween is gaining popularity internationally. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn