Witch At Night

A witch on a  journey at night
was gripping her broomstick in fright -
the batteries low,
a distance to go,
she wished that she'd traveled by kite!

written 21st October for Tania's Halloween limerick contest (used Soup's syllable checker)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Neumann Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 5:58 AM
Very funny.Kind wishes, Kai
Perrin Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 4:45 AM
Lol, love this! Congratulations x
Devonshire Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 10:34 AM
Congrats, Jack. Hope I don't run into any witches tonight!
Wolf Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:30 PM
Very good. Clever, funny, and clean!! Congrats, Jack, on your well-deserved winner in Tania's contest. Warm autumn wishes, Gershon
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 7:42 PM
I loved this first time I read it, many congrats Jack:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 7:21 PM
Very funny! Congratulations, Jack!
Kitchin Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 7:07 PM
Jack, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest, this was very clever and fun!
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 12:04 PM
GREAT job with this one too. Clever end line, Jack.
Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:10 PM
Cute one. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for all your visits. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Gee, I hadn't thought of travel by kite. Will try it this year and give the kids a break from the scary costumes I usually wear. So glad Halloween is gaining popularity internationally. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Jack, this was so cute and delightful, best of luck !
Callus Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 9:44 AM
I hope the witch sees the humour in this Limerick, Jack...might put her worries at bay! Regards // paul
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 7:41 PM
Funny, Jack. Love it.
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 2:38 PM
ha ha ha, very witty - I think she needs duracell batteries Jack:-) hugs jan xx
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