Witch

Wacko mind born confused With grotesque ugly face Web of deceit her game Worshipping evil eyes Wicked soul casting spells Wordless wrathful weaver Wounding beautiful hearts

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/11/2023 3:58:00 PM

Poor dear, if not for magic what would she do?

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/6/2023 5:14:00 AM

This reminds me in contrast with such series of The Good Witch and Bewitched. Quite a fearful sight. Loved your Pleiades though.

Tom Woody

Date: 10/4/2023 12:07:00 PM

Ha! Gotta love that first line. Witches bite!

Bill Baker

Date: 9/28/2023 4:48:00 PM

A witching Pleiades, Aura. Well-written and well described. Have a great week, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2023 8:30:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned

Silent One

Date: 9/25/2023 5:58:00 AM

You have described the nature and personality of a witch very well with great use of the letter W, I like the wordless wrathful weaver, as thats what they do weave silly stuff that cannot be understood as words... potions and spiders... anyway good luck in the contest.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/25/2023 4:15:00 AM

Awwn that last line made me go awwn! Wounding beautiful hearts! How beautiful is that! I love this pleiades your choice of words and flow of the pleiades is brilliant! And so profound and depicts witchery at its finest! In sheer eloquence! I love every line in this. Especially “ worshipping evil eyes” ooh! “ web of deceit her game” whoa! How soul hitting is that! Absolutely loved this! Definitely a winning take! Goodluck

Silent One
Date: 9/25/2023 5:58:00 AM

I guess we all interpret things differently

Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 5:37:00 AM

Hahah silent one beauty is in the eye of the readers heart! It is so beautifully phrased dnt u think? Haha

Silent One
Date: 9/25/2023 5:30:00 AM

How can a witch wounding beautiful hearts be beautiful???