Witch

Wacko mind born confused
With grotesque ugly face 
Web of deceit her game
Worshipping evil eyes
Wicked soul casting spells
Wordless wrathful weaver 
Wounding beautiful hearts

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Robert James Liguori

September 3, 2024 at 12:37 PM

What nice descriptions for a witch! I could feel her evilness. Great poem!

Richard Lamoureux

November 11, 2023 at 3:58 PM

Poor dear, if not for magic what would she do?

Victor Buhagiar

October 6, 2023 at 5:14 AM

This reminds me in contrast with such series of The Good Witch and Bewitched. Quite a fearful sight. Loved your Pleiades though.

Bill Baker

September 28, 2023 at 4:48 PM

A witching Pleiades, Aura. Well-written and well described. Have a great week, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Joseph May

September 27, 2023 at 8:30 AM

Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned

Silent One

September 25, 2023 at 5:58 AM

You have described the nature and personality of a witch very well with great use of the letter W, I like the wordless wrathful weaver, as thats what they do weave silly stuff that cannot be understood as words... potions and spiders... anyway good luck in the contest.

Ink Empress

September 25, 2023 at 4:15 AM

Awwn that last line made me go awwn! Wounding beautiful hearts! How beautiful is that! I love this pleiades your choice of words and flow of the pleiades is brilliant! And so profound and depicts witchery at its finest! In sheer eloquence! I love every line in this. Especially “ worshipping evil eyes” ooh! “ web of deceit her game” whoa! How soul hitting is that! Absolutely loved this! Definitely a winning take! Goodluck

Silent One

September 25, 2023 at 5:58 AM

I guess we all interpret things differently

Ink Empress

September 25, 2023 at 5:37 AM

Hahah silent one beauty is in the eye of the readers heart! It is so beautifully phrased dnt u think? Haha

Silent One

September 25, 2023 at 5:30 AM

How can a witch wounding beautiful hearts be beautiful???