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Witch

Wacko mind born confused
With grotesque ugly face 
Web of deceit her game
Worshipping evil eyes
Wicked soul casting spells
Wordless wrathful weaver 
Wounding beautiful hearts

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Robert James Liguori Date: 9/3/2024 12:37:00 PM What nice descriptions for a witch! I could feel her evilness. Great poem! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2023 3:58:00 PM Poor dear, if not for magic what would she do? Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/6/2023 5:14:00 AM This reminds me in contrast with such series of The Good Witch and Bewitched. Quite a fearful sight. Loved your Pleiades though. Login to Reply

Tom Woody Date: 10/4/2023 12:07:00 PM Ha! Gotta love that first line. Witches bite! Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 9/28/2023 4:48:00 PM A witching Pleiades, Aura. Well-written and well described. Have a great week, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 9/27/2023 8:30:00 AM Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 9/25/2023 5:58:00 AM You have described the nature and personality of a witch very well with great use of the letter W, I like the wordless wrathful weaver, as thats what they do weave silly stuff that cannot be understood as words... potions and spiders... anyway good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 9/25/2023 4:15:00 AM Awwn that last line made me go awwn! Wounding beautiful hearts! How beautiful is that! I love this pleiades your choice of words and flow of the pleiades is brilliant! And so profound and depicts witchery at its finest! In sheer eloquence! I love every line in this. Especially “ worshipping evil eyes” ooh! “ web of deceit her game” whoa! How soul hitting is that! Absolutely loved this! Definitely a winning take! Goodluck Login to Reply Silent One Date: 9/25/2023 5:58:00 AM I guess we all interpret things differently Ink Empress Date: 9/25/2023 5:37:00 AM Hahah silent one beauty is in the eye of the readers heart! It is so beautifully phrased dnt u think? Haha Silent One Date: 9/25/2023 5:30:00 AM How can a witch wounding beautiful hearts be beautiful???