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Wistful Thoughts

Dreaming of castles in the sky wishing that I could drop by I could maybe learn to fly Seeing unicorns passing silvery coats glistening as sun beams are shining Leaping frogs croaking at flies that are teasing by merely swooping Trees are slowly creeping ashes and oaks are bowing forest is breathing Ah dreams escaping each is speaking leaving me wondering

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/12/2024 6:48:00 AM

I enjoy the fantasy thoughts. Unicorns and frogs make me think of nursery rhymes. This is an uplifting poem.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/27/2025 1:00:00 PM

sry Hilda not been on much so pleased you liked it hugs Shadow

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/3/2024 3:28:00 PM

Hey there, dear shadow! This is absolutely stunning and so evocative! It's truly enjoyable to go through your work again after such a long time. And thanks for your comment on my page.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2024 5:40:00 PM

Been busy with books publicity Sotto publishers seem to want blood as well as words. ty for your kind comments its been lovely to read your and others work I have missed not being here hugs Shadow

Silent One

Date: 12/2/2024 9:09:00 AM

What a lovely dream or reverie.... sadly most dreams are not reality..

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2024 11:53:00 AM

dear S.O thank you so much quite right about dreams but they can be important and help us in this mixed up world hugs Shadow

Ink Empress

Date: 12/1/2024 10:23:00 PM

Dear shadow this is beyond beautiful and so descriptive how youv written this, its so good to read you after a long time, and I especially love “ forest is breathing” “unicorns passing” gives a dreamy vibe! Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2024 11:49:00 AM

ty Ink for your lovely comments been busy with my books glad all is good with you hugs Shadow