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Wistful Thoughts

Dreaming of castles in the sky
wishing that I could drop by
I could maybe learn to fly

Seeing unicorns passing 
silvery coats glistening
as sun beams are shining

Leaping frogs croaking
at flies that are teasing
by merely swooping

Trees are slowly creeping
ashes and oaks are bowing
forest is breathing

Ah dreams escaping
each is speaking
leaving me wondering

Copyright © Shadow Hamilton | Year Posted 2024

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Hilda Greenhough Date: 12/12/2024 6:48:00 AM I enjoy the fantasy thoughts. Unicorns and frogs make me think of nursery rhymes. This is an uplifting poem. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 1/27/2025 1:00:00 PM sry Hilda not been on much so pleased you liked it hugs Shadow

Sotto Poet Date: 12/3/2024 3:28:00 PM Hey there, dear shadow! This is absolutely stunning and so evocative! It's truly enjoyable to go through your work again after such a long time. And thanks for your comment on my page. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/3/2024 5:40:00 PM Been busy with books publicity Sotto publishers seem to want blood as well as words. ty for your kind comments its been lovely to read your and others work I have missed not being here hugs Shadow

Silent One Date: 12/2/2024 9:09:00 AM What a lovely dream or reverie.... sadly most dreams are not reality.. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/3/2024 11:53:00 AM dear S.O thank you so much quite right about dreams but they can be important and help us in this mixed up world hugs Shadow

Ink Empress Date: 12/1/2024 10:23:00 PM Dear shadow this is beyond beautiful and so descriptive how youv written this, its so good to read you after a long time, and I especially love “ forest is breathing” “unicorns passing” gives a dreamy vibe! Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/3/2024 11:49:00 AM ty Ink for your lovely comments been busy with my books glad all is good with you hugs Shadow