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An enchanting woman joined the wedding dance With a majestic man, celebrating gallant romance. Heavenly white gown adorned her noble stance, Aura of elegant rhythm wore a purposeful glance. Dancing through the night reaching a joyous high Having kissed bride and groom a silent good bye They disappeared into the night without a sigh After blessing couple's soul in a loving disguise. Hanging around the farm, they visit as they please, No one can see them, they can enter without keys. Their daughter married today a handsome prince, Impressed by him ever since the very first glimpse. Every evening silhouettes roam on the farm's edges To visit with their daughter behind the tall hedges. Each evening they plan an elaborate dinner menu, The theme is always about missed wedding venue. The gown she wore was designed for her wedding, Memories of their wistful romance quite dreading. Sweet child born of love, they were never married, Forbidden because of the love affair they carried. One day they decided to find love beyond earth Unable to find a footing searching for self worth. They live on the pond where they were last seen Rising for every occasion like it's a wedding scene. Placed 2nd October 1, 2017 Love for movie scenes Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 10/28/2017 12:29:00 AM
Wow, this is great, and I see it won a placement in the contest! Congrats!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2017 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Becca!
Date: 10/5/2017 11:04:00 PM
Great write Vijay! Congratulations on doing so well in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2017 5:49:00 AM
Many thanks James--appreciate your feedback.
Date: 10/5/2017 6:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest, Vijay, for your lovely, romantic poem. Sandra
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2017 7:04:00 PM
Thank you Sandra!
Date: 10/5/2017 7:38:00 AM
Beautiful write, Vijay - enjoyed it very much! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - great stuff! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Greg!
Date: 10/4/2017 7:24:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your wonderful win with this beautifully written romantic poem!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 10/4/2017 5:44:00 PM
BIG congratulations!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 10/4/2017 1:13:00 PM
Vijay, a splendid story, congratulations on your win !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thank you BW!
Date: 10/4/2017 12:41:00 PM
Back to Congratulate you on your win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2017 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 10/4/2017 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your nice win, Vijay ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2017 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 10/4/2017 9:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2017 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 10/4/2017 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay for your great win! :) Have a nice day.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2017 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 10/4/2017 6:33:00 AM
A great tale of romance my friend, one that as always you have rhymed very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2017 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 10/3/2017 8:35:00 PM
What a wistful romantic tale- I love it Vijay, it would make for an interesting movie, and excellent material for a script....Awesome and a fave...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/3/2017 9:21:00 PM
A pleasure to read your comments Maria..appreciate your visit..many thanks!
Date: 10/3/2017 4:50:00 AM
Very creative writing ... Wonderful rhyme ... A sure win ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/3/2017 6:13:00 AM
Many thanks Probir--appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/2/2017 7:10:00 PM
Joyous work here! Peace a& Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/2/2017 9:47:00 PM
Thank you Matthew!
Date: 10/2/2017 6:33:00 PM
Well written Vijay..best wishes
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Date: 10/2/2017 6:39:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 10/2/2017 6:10:00 AM
This is an excellent write my friend! I wondrous poem of romance and what Shakespeare would describe as a Tragedy! I sure loved each line of this majestic poem Vijay, such a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2017 6:35:00 AM
Many thanks Russell, appreciate your comment! Hope you are feeling better!
Date: 10/2/2017 12:21:00 AM
This good, Vijay, a winner already.
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Date: 10/2/2017 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 10/1/2017 10:56:00 PM
Very well done my friend...you are good at this...best of luck...but I smell a Winner!...god bless...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2017 6:03:00 AM
Thank you WW--love your comments!
Date: 10/1/2017 8:32:00 PM
a very mysterious tale, Vijay. The title is very enticing. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/2/2017 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--appreciate the comments!
Date: 10/1/2017 4:15:00 PM
Good luck in the contest Vijay :)
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Date: 10/1/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi!
Date: 10/1/2017 4:04:00 PM
Beautifully written, creative take on the contest theme Vijay. Wonderful rhythm, rhyme and imagery as always. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 10/1/2017 4:05:00 PM
Thank you Susan--very supportive comments--appreciate as always!
Date: 10/1/2017 3:35:00 PM
Oh Vijay, you changed the poem for the contest? This one is nice too. Is this one the one you are entering?
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/1/2017 3:49:00 PM
Yes- Heidi..I have entered this poem in the contest. Thank you, as always for your supportive comments!
Date: 10/1/2017 2:45:00 PM
- A wonderfully imaginative poems, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2017 3:13:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 10/1/2017 2:21:00 PM
a wonderful plot made unique by your creative imagination, vijay..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/1/2017 2:27:00 PM
Thank you, nette!

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