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Wistful Romance

An enchanting woman joined the wedding dance
With a majestic man, celebrating gallant romance.
Heavenly white gown adorned her noble stance,
Aura of elegant rhythm wore a purposeful glance.

Dancing through the night reaching a joyous high
Having kissed bride and groom a silent good bye
They disappeared into the night without a sigh
After blessing couple's soul in a loving disguise.

Hanging around the farm, they visit as they please,
No one can see them, they can enter without keys.
Their daughter married today a handsome prince,
Impressed by him ever since the very first glimpse.

Every evening silhouettes roam on the farm's edges 
To visit with their daughter behind the tall hedges.
Each evening they plan an elaborate dinner menu,
The theme is always about missed wedding venue.

The gown she wore was designed for her wedding,
Memories of their wistful romance quite dreading.
Sweet child born of love, they were never married,
Forbidden because of the love affair they carried.

One day they decided to find love beyond earth
Unable to find a footing searching for self worth.
They live on the pond where they were last seen
Rising for every occasion like it's a wedding scene.

Placed 2nd
October 1, 2017
Love for movie scenes
Sponsor: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Teagan Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 12:29 AM
Wow, this is great, and I see it won a placement in the contest! Congrats!
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Thank you Becca!
Swartz Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 11:04 PM
Great write Vijay! Congratulations on doing so well in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 5:49 AM
Many thanks James--appreciate your feedback.
Haight Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 6:54 PM
Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest, Vijay, for your lovely, romantic poem. Sandra
Pandit Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 7:04 PM
Thank you Sandra!
Barden Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 7:38 AM
Beautiful write, Vijay - enjoyed it very much! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - great stuff! :-)
Pandit Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 12:06 PM
Thank you Greg!
Ashley Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 7:24 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your wonderful win with this beautifully written romantic poem!
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Thank you Susan!
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 5:44 PM
BIG congratulations!!!
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Thanks Andrea!
La France Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Vijay, a splendid story, congratulations on your win !
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 1:34 PM
Thank you BW!
Roper Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 12:41 PM
Back to Congratulate you on your win!
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 1:33 PM
Thank you Eve!
Gupta Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations on your nice win, Vijay ...
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 1:33 PM
Thank you Probir!
May Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Congrats on your win Vijay
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 1:32 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Sands Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations Vijay for your great win! :) Have a nice day.
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Thank you Heidi!
One Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 6:33 AM
A great tale of romance my friend, one that as always you have rhymed very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Williams Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 8:35 PM
What a wistful romantic tale- I love it Vijay, it would make for an interesting movie, and excellent material for a script....Awesome and a fave...Maria
Pandit Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 9:21 PM
A pleasure to read your comments Maria..appreciate your visit..many thanks!
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 4:50 AM
Very creative writing ... Wonderful rhyme ... A sure win ...
Pandit Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 6:13 AM
Many thanks Probir--appreciate your comments!
Anish Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 7:10 PM
Joyous work here! Peace a& Blessings Matthew Anish
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 9:47 PM
Thank you Matthew!
May Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:33 PM
Well written Vijay..best wishes
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Sivey Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:10 AM
This is an excellent write my friend! I wondrous poem of romance and what Shakespeare would describe as a Tragedy! I sure loved each line of this majestic poem Vijay, such a lovely piece, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:35 AM
Many thanks Russell, appreciate your comment! Hope you are feeling better!
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 12:21 AM
This good, Vijay, a winner already.
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:04 AM
Thank you Eve!
Warrior Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 10:56 PM
Very well done my friend...you are good at this...best of luck...but I smell a Winner!...god bless...^WW^
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:03 AM
Thank you WW--love your comments!
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:32 PM
a very mysterious tale, Vijay. The title is very enticing. Good luck in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:03 AM
Thank you Andrea--appreciate the comments!
Sands Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 4:15 PM
Good luck in the contest Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 4:20 PM
Thanks, Heidi!
Ashley Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 4:04 PM
Beautifully written, creative take on the contest theme Vijay. Wonderful rhythm, rhyme and imagery as always. Good luck in the contest! :)
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 4:05 PM
Thank you Susan--very supportive comments--appreciate as always!
Sands Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 3:35 PM
Oh Vijay, you changed the poem for the contest? This one is nice too. Is this one the one you are entering?
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 3:49 PM
Yes- Heidi..I have entered this poem in the contest. Thank you, as always for your supportive comments!
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:45 PM
- A wonderfully imaginative poems, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Onclaud Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:21 PM
a wonderful plot made unique by your creative imagination, vijay..huggs
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Thank you, nette!
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