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Wisp of a Wind

While the whistle of a wind wafts on a sunny haze of spring's hours; heady sounds sail on air-wings' pageant: the chime of birds, long coda of cooing bees, and the wheat field's chants, so soothing... here, glossy grasses answer in windy sighs that blaze tilted butterflies traipsing on trees. Gaily the bubbling of the brook flows beside the breezy bush where west wind flows ,and bubbles burst a gentle whirl wandering along flowerbeds, that my walking leads me far beneath a sky in the softest spring... where a splendor of fluid wind- wheeze slip-slides by, blessed by the wonder, wisp, and whimsical sway of a zephyr's spring- world! Element 2: Wind Contest Sponsor: Brian Davey 3/27/2016

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Date: 3/31/2016 1:58:00 AM
Awesome Nette! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 3/30/2016 1:13:00 AM
Wonderful poetry n win nette .. big congrats!
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Date: 3/29/2016 8:29:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Nette
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Date: 3/29/2016 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations Bette on your placement in my Elements Wind Contest! I look forward to your entry into part 3 water. Great job!
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Date: 3/28/2016 1:05:00 PM
Excellent way you have chosen to express the element wind. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 3/27/2016 2:25:00 PM
! am surrounded by the whirl of your wind! Terrific poetry!
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Date: 3/27/2016 11:35:00 AM
You make it all sound so very nice in a dreamily sort of way, Nette...Quite lovely! My very best regards, Nette...And a peaceful and content Easter this most holiest of days. :) john
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Date: 3/27/2016 9:50:00 AM
I wouldn't mind walking in that breeze, especially beside a brook. Really enjoyed the read today, nette. Good luck and Peace my friend:)
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Date: 3/26/2016 11:11:00 PM
Very beautiful, I saw this as almost form poetry, as I felt the wind. :) Hugs
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