Gregory Richard Barden Poet Sedoka

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Wish's Bloom

Your sublime allure

Like plum blossoms on Fuji

Trembling with love's covenant

Unclasped by Spring's kiss

To alight, giggling, my heart

I miss you, Lotus Petal


** FOURTEENTH PLACE in the "Oh How I Miss You Poetry Contest", Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer, Judge & Sponsor. **

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Subimal Sinha-Roy August 24, 2017 at 10:17 PM Congratulations, Greg. Gregory Richard Barden August 24, 2017 at 10:20 PM Thank you, Subimal.

Vijay Pandit August 24, 2017 at 6:09 PM Congrats, Greg! Gregory Richard Barden August 24, 2017 at 6:11 PM Thanks, Vijay! :-)

Joseph May August 24, 2017 at 5:57 PM Congrats on your win Gregory Richard Barden August 24, 2017 at 5:58 PM Thanks, Joseph ... blessings, Friend. :-)

Heidi Sands August 24, 2017 at 5:39 PM Congratulations Greg :) Gregory Richard Barden August 24, 2017 at 5:41 PM Thanks so much, Heidi - congrats on FOURTH! :-)

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer August 24, 2017 at 5:37 PM Beautiful image. Gregory Richard Barden August 24, 2017 at 5:39 PM Thank you, Cecelia.

Darlene De Beaulieu August 21, 2017 at 8:04 AM Yes i agree with Julie your poem is filled with love and imagination. have a good day my friend. Gregory Richard Barden August 21, 2017 at 8:49 AM Thank you very much, Darlene - that's very sweet of you - this one was very special, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! Blessings! :-)

Russell Sivey August 20, 2017 at 4:11 AM Isn't that a Yoga move, Lotus Petal? This is an awesome write Greg, I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! You surely have enthralled me by your skill at writing a Sedoka, I'm impressed! Great Work!! Gregory Richard Barden August 20, 2017 at 8:55 PM Thank you SO very kindly, My Friend - so pleased you enjoyed this, and that it brightened your morning! Blessings, Brother!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 19, 2017 at 8:13 AM Darling pen Greg, I love it :) good luck! xomo Gregory Richard Barden August 20, 2017 at 8:56 PM So kind of you, Maureen - so pleased you enjoyed this, thank you!