Wishing To Ride

The train hurdles into the black
    Bound for who knows where and back
      White billowing from its smoke stack
         Mesmerized by it repetitive clickity clack
            Wondering,and wishfully looking down the track...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Way to go with this great winning work..Clickity-clack...Sara
Mehta Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 7:39 AM
Nice flow of words and expressions. Congrats on a fine win, barbara
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April 9, 2014 at 8:58 PM
BARBARA, , it's an honor to be the first to comment this poem. A poem, i enjoyed while in my contest... THANK YOU VERY MUCH, CONGRATULATIONS.... :) This was a very tough one to judge... GEEES, enjoy my latest blog if you like.... always & forever... Linda
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