Wishing Star

Wishing on a falling

star on a delightful

sweet summer night

brought us dreams to

complete our,

childhood fantasies.


Written 6-24-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 2:39 AM
Wistful and romantic. Nice one!
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 11:13 PM
Hey, I just wrote on that topic in my triolet post! Sometimes we think along the same lines, James!! (must be our age or something)
Kendrick Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 1:31 PM
Great that your dreams came true..We all desire that special star..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Horne Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 7:11 AM
What a lovely romantic poem, James
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