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Wishing For Longer Time

I barely recall moments in the farmland, Noting from albums how we pranced around fireflies With trails of grass sprouting on red clay , like Emerald fringes weaving through the orchard: Somehow, I wished for longer remembrances, Framed on decades of sepia portraits hanging By ancient walls … our laughter gliding upon Blurred visions of summer moons. Yet, you grew Tiresome, more listless. Soon, autumn held me quite Dismayed ; our revues paling…waning , Grandfather. Now I WALK slowly on our field, laughing…but I cry inside. For at age three, my girlish heart yearned To savor more, more of time, utterly ominous. Contest of Julie Leigh Rodeheaver Wish I Knew You When I Was Young 11/29/2017

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Date: 11/29/2017 8:00:00 AM
If only it was possible, you know the funny thing is when we are young we cant wait to grow up, but when we grow up we wish we were children... Loved your poem...
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Date: 11/28/2017 5:47:00 PM
Beautiful yet sad Nette. I never got to meet my grandmother's on either side, just one grandfather, but we were close until in my late teens he passed away. Your poem is beautifully written! : )
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Date: 11/28/2017 4:07:00 PM
I think this is something we all wish for, beautiful poem.
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Date: 11/28/2017 3:01:00 PM
More time...the bells ring it out. Lovely tribute! Today I was asking my dad more about my grandpa who died when I was two. He finally can talk about him. Blessings and hugs, my friend!
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Date: 11/28/2017 1:09:00 PM
Adoring poem of memories from the beloved past with a loved one--very well written--best for a win, nette!
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