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Wishing for a sunset

` Once upon a twilight time she sat as clouds drifted on the horizon with her eyes still shut as she dreamed hoping for a day that did not leave her all alone wishing for a sunset to share with one she loves
9/23/19 Written for the: Yalto poems only Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet Checked by: howmanysllyables.com

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Date: 10/1/2019 11:51:00 AM
"once upon a twilight time..." poetry! Congratulations Chris. ( in case I haven't said so, it's so good to have you back! )
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Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, that is such a nice thing to say to me.
Date: 9/30/2019 8:59:00 PM
Congratulations for your great win Chris! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi.
Date: 9/30/2019 6:57:00 PM
This flowed through with love yearning. glad to see you place with this beauty.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Jeanne
Date: 9/30/2019 6:47:00 PM
came back to say congratulations in Emile's contest with this one my friend :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 7:37:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 9/30/2019 1:42:00 PM
Loved this write, such a yearning is felt for her dreams to come true to share beauty with a beloved is the most precious thing and you captured it well in this winner, congrats to you for a masterful write!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/30/2019 2:20:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 9/30/2019 1:08:00 PM
One of the Yalto gems I unfortunately missed. Congrats on a well-deserved win, Chris!:-)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/30/2019 2:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Edward for your comment and creating the format. It was fun to write.
Date: 9/30/2019 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations Chris, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/30/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Emile. It was a fun form to write.
Date: 9/24/2019 12:45:00 PM
A whimsical beautiful write - I hope her dream becomes a reality! Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer. I appreciate your kindness
Date: 9/24/2019 8:57:00 AM
Lovely Chris. I can see her lounging in the twilight wishing her special someone would come to enjoy it with her. Nicely done with great imagery. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Judy. It was a new form for me, I am glad you liked it.
Date: 9/24/2019 8:02:00 AM
I am not familiar with the form but I like how it came out. Good luck in the contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 8:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard. I wasn't familiar with it either until I read the contest rules yesterday.
Date: 9/24/2019 5:01:00 AM
Wow so sorry I missed this one yesterday!;( would have made my night pass a bit quicker! Work is exhausting but still sleepless nights and this would have sang me into sweet dreams! She and I could have chatted about a love that couldn't be!;) beautiful Chris!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Brenda. I wrote this quickly at the end of the day yesterday. I am thrilled you liked it.
Date: 9/23/2019 9:53:00 PM
I can picture this and can feel her hopes and dreams to share the sunset with the one she loves. Beautifully written Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for your kind thoughts
Date: 9/23/2019 7:46:00 PM
How sweet, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 9/23/2019 7:06:00 PM
this is gorgeous....you can feel her longing, trying to break through the clouds...love it, good luck in the contest my friend! Hugs :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sandy.
Date: 9/23/2019 6:07:00 PM
aww so full of longing Chris, a beautiful Yalto, its quite a challenging form to write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 7:41:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan. Yes it was difficult, I almost didn't do it.
Date: 9/23/2019 6:05:00 PM
a very different style for you, chris, but you've certainly risen to the challenge! best of luck in the contest...
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Ilene.
Date: 9/23/2019 5:32:00 PM
Beautiful poem! BOL in the contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 7:40:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 9/23/2019 5:23:00 PM
Felt the ache in this one ~ a wonderful take on a challenge I found to be more difficult than it first appeared. I really enjoyed this, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 5:25:00 PM
It was definitely difficult, that's for sure. I almost gave up. Thank you my friend, your comments always bring a smile to my face.