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Wishing

Wishes. Sometimes people wish for things to benefit themselves which is all well and good, I suppose But what if you wanted to wish for something else maybe for a friend or for a friend you haven't even met yet But if I had just one wish I'd wish for the world to be a better place not just for me but for all of the people out there fighting Fighting for freedom or maybe equality I'd wish it on the people caught in the crossfire losing everything they have for a war they never wanted But I'd wish it on the people I hate, too Because everybody deserves a chance at seeing the world at peace with clean air and happy people and at a universe filled with love ~Marie Viloria~ 9th place in the contest: If I Had One Wish, What Would It Be?

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Date: 6/3/2011 6:20:00 AM
WONDERFUL write Marie...congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:44:00 AM
My Congratulations on the win in the contest of Kristen, Marie
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Date: 6/2/2011 9:09:00 PM
Congrats Marie on your wonderful win with this awesome entry ..enjoy luv..
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Date: 6/2/2011 6:57:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! Great win!!! thumbs up for you... ***jun-jun
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Date: 5/27/2011 8:47:00 PM
awesome poem thanks for sharing it
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Date: 5/27/2011 4:05:00 PM
Marie, to wish and have it fulfilled is the one gift we need . But, not to be greedy over. Thanks for sharing your xool poem,..p.d.
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