Wishing

Wishes.
Sometimes people wish
for things to benefit
themselves
which is all well and good,
I suppose

But what if you
wanted to wish
for something else
maybe for a friend
or for a friend you haven't
even met yet

But if I had just one wish
I'd wish
for the world to be a better place
not just for me
but for all of the people
out there fighting

Fighting for freedom
or maybe equality

I'd wish it on the people
caught in the crossfire
losing everything they have
for a war they never wanted

But I'd wish it
on the people I hate, too

Because everybody deserves
a chance
at seeing the world at peace
with clean air
and happy people
and at a universe

filled with love

~Marie Viloria~

9th place in the contest: If I Had One Wish, What Would It Be?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 3, 2011 at 6:20 AM
WONDERFUL write Marie...congrats on your win..
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 4:52 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Marie. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 4:44 AM
My Congratulations on the win in the contest of Kristen, Marie
Sweetheart Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 9:09 PM
Congrats Marie on your wonderful win with this awesome entry ..enjoy luv..
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June 2, 2011 at 6:57 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! Great win!!! thumbs up for you... ***jun-jun
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May 27, 2011 at 8:47 PM
awesome poem thanks for sharing it
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May 27, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Marie, to wish and have it fulfilled is the one gift we need . But, not to be greedy over. Thanks for sharing your xool poem,..p.d.
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