Notes About The Poem

This work uses musical terms in the form of puns.                  
And wordplay equvalents.                                                       
Note as in written letter, or note in music.    
Scale as to  climb or scale in music.                                     
Bow which a violist uses has several pronounciations.       
One of them equates to the sound of someone's beau.                    
Strings in a musical sense or terms and conditions                  
 

 

 

 

 

wishful thinking

a violist’s note
to her bow, let’s scale the heights…..
with no strings attached
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 3:08 PM
Loving this one again. Congratulations on the win
Kitchin Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 12:29 PM
Howard, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever poem.
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 4:45 AM
I like this senryu. The play on words is fascinating. I think it could go either way in a person's thinking either musically or just as common use of the words but thanks for the explanation. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 10:59 AM
Yes!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 10:55 AM
Clever last line!
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