wishful thinking

cute violist’s dream
to scale the heights with my “bow”……..
with no strings attached!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 11, 2026 at 6:23 AM
Oh this is a brilliant senryu, hued with layer humour and intrigue and the last line with no strings attached, ah, sums up well! Clever word choices as well, you've created a whole atmosphere within a few words.. pleasure reading this today, sending you light and best wishes always ~ 💫💫✨✨
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August 10, 2026 at 4:11 AM
I felt a moment of humor and a smile come to my face upon reading this one. I am delighted I chose it to read today. Thanks for sharing. Way to go. Sara K. 👍
Kerr Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 4:50 AM
I’m absolutely delighted that my post brought a moment of humour and a smile to your face, Sara. Your visit truly valued and appreciated. Howard
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January 22, 2026 at 10:34 AM
Great word play in your Valentine senryu. Is there supposed to be a ? at front of line 1? Maybe it's a typo.
Kerr Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 11:56 AM
Thank you, Andrea, for alerting me to an error I thought I had removed. Much appreciated as is your slant on my work. Thanks again, Howard
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