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Wishful Encounter

i wish for serpentine waters i wish for stormy skies i wish for a playful river i wish for you and i i wish for stupendous sunlight i wish for inkblot shadows i wish for tremendous colors hues that makes us cry i wish to appear invisible beneath redwoods i wish to vanish below their verdant foliage and hear the sparrows populate the forest with song as we release a mutual sigh i wish to feel the wind touch my lips and the moon quake with weakened pulse as the flaming campfire of dusk dies out and our spirits brave goodbye 6/13/2017

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Date: 6/14/2017 3:23:00 PM
Oh Kim, this is stunning! I love reading poetry like this. A fave for me! : )
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Date: 6/14/2017 10:29:00 AM
I really like what you have done with this Kim. Really beautiful. I especially like what you did with the last lines of each stanza. - Dean
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2017 2:59:00 PM
Thanks, Dean! Played with this one for a while :)
Date: 6/14/2017 4:02:00 AM
- Agree ... a beautiful poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2017 6:58:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 6/13/2017 9:33:00 PM
Beautiful, Kim! I like this one a lot!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2017 9:34:00 PM
Thanks, White Wolf!

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