Wishes To Atoms

With so many full moons on his calendar
His high tide will never surrender
He’s a failed star
And must live with that scar 
Neither here nor there,
Just floating hot air

There, I found all your wishes
Caught in his bearlike clutches
On their way to a wishing star
Condemned to him like Europa
Married to him with an inescapable ring of gravity
Of colliding rage and heart tearing jealousy

He winked his red eye 
Neither unwanted nor unwelcome
Aroused a fury of inferno
At the Venus I weather
His Giant storm in my sphere 
To suffocate the vacuum inside my fear

Light years from my universe 
Souls howl like hounds to his moons
Those alien worlds that never were, but still exist
And wishes fall into a black hole to never exit
A place where humanity’s raised to Mars 
And my ashes return to atoms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 15, 2015 at 11:00 PM
Thabang, thank you for the kind reply...PD
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January 11, 2015 at 9:36 PM
THABANG,, congratulations on your well-deserved win, enjoying the elements above. Always :) LINDA
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January 12, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Hi Linda...you've been ever so present and I appreciate your welcome and congrats and this will spur me on to keep writing...regards, Thabang
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January 7, 2015 at 2:46 AM
There are some very clever poems in this contest and your is testimony to that, congratulations Thabang xx
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January 7, 2015 at 11:39 AM
Hi Mandy...thank you for your comment, feel chuffed...rgds, Thabang
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January 6, 2015 at 6:30 PM
This poem is so clever.... I would place it much higher !! Well done, and congratulations to you!
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January 6, 2015 at 7:46 PM
Hi Carrie...thank you for your comments...it's been great participating in the contest and being part of PoetrySoup in general...rgds, Thabang
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January 6, 2015 at 5:56 PM
Wow what majesty & a great ending too! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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January 6, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Hi Debbie...thank you, I'm humbled...rgds, Thabang
Allison Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 5:11 PM
I adored the imagery in your creative write - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Ngoma Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Thanks Jan...I loved drawing the Solar Sytem as a kid, especially Jupiter, his red eye...this poem has a lot to do with that period...rgds, Thabang
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January 6, 2015 at 4:44 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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January 6, 2015 at 5:24 PM
Hi Thank you...the first time I'm learning of this...thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed it...rgrds, Thabang
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January 6, 2015 at 2:36 PM
wow, so finely designed.. a bunch of congrats to you, thabang
Ngoma Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Hi Nette...I wish I could take credit, but I merely commented on the beauty that was already there all along...many thanks, rgds Thabang
Jones Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 5:33 PM
I truly enjoyed reading this wonderfully penned piece of poetry. :O) Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Jones Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Hi Thabang. You are most welcome. Same here. :O) Awww. Thank you. :O) *S* Cynthia
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January 5, 2015 at 5:47 PM
Hi Cynthia...thanks for sharing your sunlight with me. I do love the stars and all that connects us...I'm truly touched by your warmth...rgds, Thabang
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December 20, 2014 at 4:24 PM
THABANG, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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December 21, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Hi Linda...compliments of the season to you. And thank you. Poetry Soup is overwhelmingly, overwhelming. The love, kind well whishes, just too much really. I am actually looking for inpiration for a work in progress titled 'Snow in Africa.' I think the 'Winter Poems' will definately assist / inspire me further...rgds, Thabang
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December 11, 2014 at 5:14 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Thabang - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 11, 2014 at 10:26 AM
Hi Anne, thank you so much for such a warm welcome. I have been reading a lot of the poetry on your site long before deciding to join or post and I'm inspired by the great writings daily. Peace!
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