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Wishes Three

If I were granted wishes three, the first would be most certainly: All hearts with charity would fill while not one soul would lose free will. The second would be just for me if I were granted wishes three: Creative thoughts would ever flow; my full potential I would know. I’d wish, for me and mine, good health. . more vital than material wealth. If I were granted wishes three: A hale and hearty family! My dear ones strong, my muse inspired, a world where pure love is desired! What better wishes could there be if I were granted wishes three? For Amy Green's contest: If I Could Have Three Wishes

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Date: 2/3/2011 11:57:00 AM
Yes these are the wishes that me also would have desired!beautiful write!--kashinath
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Date: 1/19/2011 4:00:00 AM
Awesome wishlist Andrea, a testimony of the amazing person that you are.. Oh yes I do enjoy reading the ones I didn't read yet.. my lunch time is almost over ;( love Wilma
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Date: 5/2/2010 6:46:00 AM
Terrific choice of three wishes Andrea, many congratulations on your win in Amy's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:26:00 AM
congrats this is a great one!
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Date: 4/30/2010 8:57:00 AM
Congrats on your 3rd Place win in the contest, Andrea! Very nice! hugs, Jimmy
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Date: 4/29/2010 9:04:00 PM
See? My first post in the soup was spot on. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:29:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your winning 3rd place in Amy's contest Three Wishes.. an stirring and beautiful write nicely rhymed and truly enjoyable to read my friend.. enjoy this special victory.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/25/2010 7:32:00 PM
WELL DONE !!! how did I miss this post, guess what I entered another contest thanks 4 the suggestion. May be I s**k at them, but everyone is doing them . Back 2 the drawing board,,Irma
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Date: 4/24/2010 10:43:00 AM
Hey! This is Walt Disney stuff! Now don't get sore - I love Walt Disney...just a big kid at heart. Your poem touches that kid in me. Love, Dave
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:50:00 PM
A desired picture of utopia. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:28:00 PM
Andrea I love the fact no one can be greedy on the wish poems.. I would have gone for the super gold, I wish you good luck, I wish you the best, I wish you come in after me..Got to laugh on that one. Always a friend..p.d.
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:08:00 PM
Wow. I love this. My first post as a new poet on the soup is to say I love your poem. Good luck in the contest.
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