Wishes From Yesterday

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Yesterday's Wishes Contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish

Sparks explode on piercing skies, to drown upon a basement of grass. 
An uzi and more cannons so keenly edged glimmer bright--
soon, real soon the red of blood will run dry.

City folks' imprints fade to dust where
oppression sets sail on a once quiet land,
time gnawing urgent prayers to mumbled speech; 
an end to goodness that's divinely human.

Then, a simple wish, a dream. A reality?
A wish for harmony marked long ago 
still unmet , unfulfilled  while bodies pile
on layered sheets fresh and damp.

So how do we know the why from which
of this endless conflict?

But pain comes and goes hat in hand,
sometimes,
victims beg for sudden death right on hallowed mud.
Sometimes, anguish hits so desperately hard , forgetting to skip a beat ,
as more sparks blare, rat-tat- tat--
until God only knows what   when forgiveness of all wounds should heal ...

Under siege, on wishes never granted,
do men persist on fighting the evil this violence wields?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 7/10/2024 7:24:00 AM
this is an excellent, thought provoking piece, very well written and expressed; i particularly like the ending..deserved a higher placement really, but the standard was extremely high in this contest, difficult to choose between them i imagine - congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/8/2024 9:15:00 AM
Dear Nette, your powerful imagery and sensory sprinklings brings me to the heart of this heart-wrenching poem with ease. The innocents suffer immensely for the wants and greed of the few in power, corrupted by power. Your artistry and poetic finesse shines. Congratulations for your win in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/5/2024 10:42:00 PM
Wonderful writing. Congrats and God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 7/5/2024 7:03:00 PM
Nice thoughts. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Happy writing.
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Date: 6/28/2024 9:21:00 PM
Excellent write, my friend. Money is the root of all evil and they prefer the wars to go on because of the money it brings to those that sell all the equipment used for war.
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Date: 6/28/2024 7:53:00 PM
Awesome poetic reflections Nette with no easy answers. War may be big business as Daniel suggests, but lust for power, greed and of course pure hatred fuels the fires for Ares
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Date: 6/28/2024 6:13:00 PM
I think the answer lies in the word "profit" War and killing is big business. It feeds man's hunger for greed. "wishes never granted" You nailed it! Nice to read your thoughts again, Nette:)
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