David Crandall Poet Rhyme

Wishes for a Spider

In the whole wide world (and even wider),
I wish you were the happiest spider, 
and so, I wish you, sadly, with a sigh, 
a helpless fly...so you won't cry.

You can cover him up with slime,
a corrosive, digestive enzyme,
that he may very slowly die,
and I don't have to hear you cry.

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Gershon Wolf February 3, 2025 at 9:20 PM Little Miss Muffet is patiently waiting offstage for her turn at your creative imagination, David... ~ Curds and Whey David Crandall February 4, 2025 at 3:28 PM Dear Curds and Whey, see my latest poem, "Dear Miss Muffet". David Crandall February 4, 2025 at 7:10 AM Wow, yesterday, I was just thinking that exact same thing, and scrawled a few notes, so I wouldn't forget. Then, I got distracted with contests. I'm hoping with the next week or so, to have a poem out entitled something like "Dear Miss Muffet". It's uncanny that you read my mind. Maybe, I'm too predictable.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh February 3, 2025 at 8:21 PM The unbalanced relationship between the spider and fly -a nice metaphor. David Crandall February 3, 2025 at 9:01 PM I think I was just semi-consciously being funny, but your analysis makes me feel like it was better than I thought it was. I think it's very interesting. The subconscious mind may have a rhyme or reason that the conscious mind is not aware of. David Crandall February 3, 2025 at 8:57 PM I hadn't really thought too much writing that (probably shows), but yes, we're talking about killing a fly by slow torture, just to avoid a little discomfort in both the narrator and the spider - very unbalanced, and a metaphor, for aspects of society. I can see that.

Hilda Greenhough February 3, 2025 at 6:59 PM Spiders, the bug with a beautiful face. Lol. I'm glad we are much larger. David Crandall February 3, 2025 at 8:53 PM In the Harry Potter books, I seem to remember they had a spider creature that was bigger than people -scary!

Jan Allison February 3, 2025 at 2:06 PM I'm not a fan of spiders but this is fun and very descriptive David the second stanza made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison February 4, 2025 at 2:10 AM Oh I loved Charlotte's web as a child lol David Crandall February 3, 2025 at 2:51 PM Glad you got a smile, Jan. Have you ever read Charlotte's Web? If I remember correctly, in that book they describe what a spider does to a fly, and I'll admit, it isn't pretty, so I can see your stance, with regards to spiders (lol) :-)