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Wishes 10

If I had 10 wishes
I would use them this way
Homes for  the homeless 
So they will have somewhere to stay

Supply food to the hungry
Where constant sun hits the land.
They also need water
Because their soil is all sand.

To the countries at war
I send them peace.
Cos to live by the gun
Is not at all nice.

To the barren countries 
With no birdsong to hear,
I send them music 
To help bring them some cheer

A wish to say many  thanks 
To the carers that care.
So people can stay at home
Find their independence there.

Wish for love for the sad ones
So their hearts will be raised
A hug for the sufferers
So their pain will be eased

To the poets on poetrysoup
I give them the fame
Of people seeing their poems
People knowing your name.

The last wish if you don't mind
I will keep for myself
So I can ask God
Please don't let me be left on the shelf.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/16/2013 11:13:00 PM
In my store of emotions I remember vodka on the shelf, but I didn't see you there lol. A humble list indeed. Nice poem Seren.
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Date: 10/10/2012 6:46:00 PM
Love your giving personality, Seren! You would definitely earn the right to keep a wish to yourself :) great write
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Date: 10/8/2012 10:34:00 PM
Seren, love the hope in your poem... Thank you for this awesome poem. Goodnight :-)~ PD
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/9/2012 8:28:00 AM
Hello PD, Hope is one thing we have an abundance of, without it life would be very negative. Seren
Date: 10/8/2012 4:19:00 PM
I think that we all don't want to be left on the shelf and useless..Enjoyed reading your catchy lines..Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/9/2012 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Sara for making the time to comment. Seren
Date: 10/8/2012 10:19:00 AM
Very nice thoughts...it shows you've got a loving heart...enjoyed your poem.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/9/2012 8:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comments, thank you for stopping by.
Date: 10/8/2012 5:28:00 AM
Beautiful words and a vision shared by many. Lovely!! Big hugs Michael
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/8/2012 7:42:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words. Seren
Date: 10/8/2012 2:35:00 AM
Seren, What a lovely humble poem in your wishes for others less fortunate and for those infirm and needing help. This would make a wonderful poem to share with children in schools because they need lessons like this to help them grow into caring adults. A person could not write a poem like this unless they posess these qualities themselves. You honor all with this lovely poem!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/8/2012 7:42:00 AM
wow your words have overwhelmed me, thank you. Seren
Date: 10/8/2012 1:31:00 AM
Thank you for leaving a comment. I do appreciate it. Seren :)
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Date: 10/8/2012 1:21:00 AM
Very thoughtful write:)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/8/2012 7:43:00 AM
Thyank you. Seren

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