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Wished It Were You

It were you It's been ages as I wait moments frozen in my silvery plaits, Years be counted in my wrinkles passion shines as hope twinkles, Autumns returned in the orange hue, as crispy leaves cherished their due, Vibrant flowers in mesmerising cover, Wished it were you back every summer ! I waited as perished every flower, and sweet fruits all turned sour, Yellow leaves swiftly bid adieu, Turned at knocks to find it were you ! Many autumns passed by to the sweet lovers convoy, As I reeled in worst of fears my emotions shuddered in tears, How long ! How long do I wait ? With brush of youth, I colour my plait, and camouflage smiles with wrinkles, to find if life the soul can sprinkle, As breeze renders me a soft caress, Tranquil in time our breaths coalesce, raindrops to tune of our hearts will rhyme, Sure it must be you teaching mime ! Inspired by song by Suzanne- It could have been you Album #2 Written Sept 17th, 2015 For contest by James Fraser Awarded N/A Now entered for "Screwed VII" contest by rob carmack Awarded 2nd place win Now entered for contest "Romantic poem- old/ new" Sponsor- Skat A Awarded 8th place win

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Date: 12/7/2015 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Upma. Enjoyed your poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/7/2015 3:07:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Sharma on your excellent write.
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/6/2015 5:22:00 PM
Dr Upma <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 11/7/2015 9:05:00 PM
Lovely, moving poem! Congratulations on your win. Janice
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Date: 11/5/2015 1:46:00 PM
hey Dr. Upma, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning in the Screwed V11 contest! I honestly can't figure out what some folks are thinking when they judge - oh well - thank goodness Rob saw the beauty in this. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 11/5/2015 12:02:00 PM
Dr Upma, congrats on your win in Rob Carmack's contest. SKAT
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Date: 11/4/2015 10:38:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win on wonderful poem. Anisha D
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Date: 10/14/2015 12:49:00 AM
Beautiful rhyming scheme and amazing use of lovely words....
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Date: 9/21/2015 2:09:00 AM
Dr. Upma, I enjoyed this heartfelt rhyme. It's also such a moving and romantic write. Good job! Best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis 7
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Date: 9/18/2015 7:21:00 PM
Such a wonderful romantic Rhyme, Dr. Upma. Best wishes for the contest. And thank you for your visit and nice comments about my poem, 'The Stepping Stone." Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/17/2015 3:32:00 PM
Really good Upma. Rich with imagery and excellent flow. good luck Tim
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Date: 9/17/2015 9:32:00 AM
Upma, you have penned a lovely rhyme, so enjoyed, 7 and thanks for visiting my immortal cell poem . . .
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