Notes About The Poem

wish you were here

fresh as falling snow
warm as roasted chestnuts
sweet as candied truffles

i'm sending you
a care package
a special delivery

kisses by the dozen
across the miles
beyond the ocean
on this lonesome christmas day


AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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January 19, 2025 at 11:01 AM
Such a sweet message, happy new year Line. xx
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January 11, 2025 at 3:57 PM
What a nice Christmas present!
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January 11, 2025 at 4:26 PM
much appreciated, thanks ~ happy new year, David.
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January 11, 2025 at 9:12 AM
Sweet and soothing, Line
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 4:26 PM
thanks, Andrea ~
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January 10, 2025 at 3:03 PM
Aww…comforting hugs ~ Kim
Gauthier Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 4:43 PM
Thanks, Kim ~ happy new year !
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