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Wish Upon the Star

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                              Manoeuvring through purplish cerulean azure 
                      'Til she touched the empyrean Zion
                    Perching above the whinstone during cockcrow
                                 Possessing allured ala lined with grandiosity
                        Dressed like a virgin woman from heaven
                                Divine messenger? A cherub?
                                    " NO! " - An Orphic pixie
                           Cradling the scintillation with her left mitt
                             Intent - coveting for self-innovation
                   Reflection seems so distant from bliss and poise
            Apathy, twinges of regrets and pieces of sorrow- ECHOED
                      Yeah! Mystic frolicsome otherworldly wight
                                      Wishing to be a HUMAN
               Human - not a perfect being but ready to CHANGE!
                                             Fairy be a woman...


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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/24/2011 12:22:00 AM

Light and lovely verse - loved the last line, it wraps it up beautifully.

George Aul

Date: 7/12/2011 10:22:00 AM

Grand words and thought in your poem............ .......George

James Foulk

Date: 7/11/2011 11:21:00 AM

a great write, very creative.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/10/2011 9:19:00 AM

Very original interpretation of the photo, Jun-Jun. Like the way you had her holding a star while wishing she were human. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2011 1:31:00 AM

jun-jun, I like how you had her wanting to be a human and that last line. also found it cute how you mentioned her having a mitt. An interesting poem!

Johnny Sumler

Date: 7/10/2011 12:07:00 AM

You really control a outstanding creative pen. Seems like you put a lot of inspiration and emotion into your wonderful writes. This piece is very well an entry of beauty. Its such an honor to share contests wins with you. Do continue your fantastic entries!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/9/2011 7:02:00 PM

A great entry for the fairy contest. Very appealing. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

Jhobeb Villasor

Date: 7/9/2011 3:01:00 AM

hehehe... Blood was pouring from my nose while reading it... Its too deep to reach for my comprehending.. Cool poem though...

Jeff Sampica

Date: 7/9/2011 2:55:00 AM

This might be one of my favorite poems on this site. Perfect flow from line to line.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/8/2011 9:06:00 PM

an enchanting work with winning streak, jun... very mystical... pinoy-galing! :) huggs, nette