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Wish Upon the Star

~~~~~ ^-^ *-* ~~~~~ Manoeuvring through purplish cerulean azure 'Til she touched the empyrean Zion Perching above the whinstone during cockcrow Possessing allured ala lined with grandiosity Dressed like a virgin woman from heaven Divine messenger? A cherub? " NO! " - An Orphic pixie Cradling the scintillation with her left mitt Intent - coveting for self-innovation Reflection seems so distant from bliss and poise Apathy, twinges of regrets and pieces of sorrow- ECHOED Yeah! Mystic frolicsome otherworldly wight Wishing to be a HUMAN Human - not a perfect being but ready to CHANGE! Fairy be a woman... ~~~~~ ^-^ *-* ~~~~~

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Date: 7/24/2011 12:22:00 AM
Light and lovely verse - loved the last line, it wraps it up beautifully.
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Date: 7/12/2011 10:22:00 AM
Grand words and thought in your poem............ .......George
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:21:00 AM
a great write, very creative.
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Date: 7/10/2011 9:19:00 AM
Very original interpretation of the photo, Jun-Jun. Like the way you had her holding a star while wishing she were human. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/10/2011 1:31:00 AM
jun-jun, I like how you had her wanting to be a human and that last line. also found it cute how you mentioned her having a mitt. An interesting poem!
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:07:00 AM
You really control a outstanding creative pen. Seems like you put a lot of inspiration and emotion into your wonderful writes. This piece is very well an entry of beauty. Its such an honor to share contests wins with you. Do continue your fantastic entries!
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Date: 7/9/2011 7:02:00 PM
A great entry for the fairy contest. Very appealing. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/9/2011 3:01:00 AM
hehehe... Blood was pouring from my nose while reading it... Its too deep to reach for my comprehending.. Cool poem though...
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Date: 7/9/2011 2:55:00 AM
This might be one of my favorite poems on this site. Perfect flow from line to line.
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Date: 7/8/2011 9:06:00 PM
an enchanting work with winning streak, jun... very mystical... pinoy-galing! :) huggs, nette
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