Wish Upon a Star

My heart beats out loud,
So far he can't hear
All i want is one wish upon a star,
To be there,
To be near.

To look in his eyes,
And know that he's mine,
Because i promise you
We've got nothing but time.

But life's not like that
So i'll shed a tear,
Watch as he leaves me,
My love,
My dear.

Now look to the star's 
The die has been cast
He's not my future,
Only my past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 21, 2013 at 12:08 AM
Nice little write to convey your feelings about this man. Just one thing: remove the apostrophe from "star's" in your fifteenth line. Apostrophes are not needed to convert nouns from singular to plural.
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