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Wish Upon a Shooting Star

a shooting star streaked tail of bright sparkling fireworks- wind made whispered wish 11/2/2018 I saw a shooting star last night; the sight filled me with awe. I’ve seen them before, but this was different. It shot across the sky breaking apart and dissolving; reminded me of fireworks.

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Carol Mays

Date: 11/26/2018 9:50:00 PM

Thanks for the magical images. So beautiful.

Constance La France

Date: 11/24/2018 10:45:00 AM

Eve, a beautiful poem, well done and thanks for sharing that lovely music and song, it brought back lots of memories for me ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2018 8:49:00 AM

They do bring awe. I have only see a very few in my lifetime. I hope it brings you the best of luck. Sara

John Michaels

Date: 11/7/2018 7:13:00 AM

Sounds like a wonderful experience - hope your wish comes true!! ;) Regards, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2018 6:23:00 PM

How neat that you saw this phenomenon and then wrote of it Nicely done.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/4/2018 11:03:00 PM

...and I hope your wish comes true...Very nice, Eve. Hugs...Charlie

Kishan Sharma

Date: 11/3/2018 6:56:00 PM

Nice one

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/3/2018 5:23:00 PM

Well done! Most people are too busy wondering what the "omen" foretells than in making wishes. Lucky you live where you can still see the stars at night! Aloha! Rico

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/3/2018 12:53:00 AM

They are spectacular to see Eve and yes some differ, some more magnificent than others, and you wait hoping to see another like it but it never shows. Tom.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/2/2018 11:48:00 PM

The poem is so perfect, the photo was unnecessary, but it surely did bring me right back my childhood, so thank you, Eve.