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Last night, As I stared up at the sky, Stars glistening, stirring hope within, Breaking through the silence, Erasing all the doubt, the shadows Waning as the little lights Twinkled, fading in and out – Freeing my dreams, my feelings Emotions breathing creativity Last night, The glimmer of starlight above me, Wishes started to caress my smile, Yearnings – deep and alive inside, Where the fantasy, the desire… Burned like a blazing fire, Illuminating my heart, my soul With dreams so alive they blistered My feelings with vision, pulsating Faith, freedom – fulfillment Last night, I stared up at the sky, Wishing on a star as it sparkled, Glowing across the night, Heavy with beauty and soothing Away every fear, comforting As it shone, brighter than the moon, Trembling with joy – inviting My heart to believe in the dream, To wish – like a child who is Caught up with certainty, so willing To remember that the stars, themselves Are His miracles, His gifts… Last night, I wished on a star and now… The beauty of that moment reminds Me that the truth is far more Beautiful than any fantasy, any dream The truth is that my wish came true The moment that I gave my heart to you

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Date: 1/19/2023 1:27:00 PM
ahhh, wishing on a star. I still can remember!! the ending on this is fantastic, Gina
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