Wish I Was Your Addiction

Wish I was your addiction,
Upon a star non fiction,
never ending hole so deep,
Life would seem more complete

If you'd wake up, 
crack open my bedroom door,
To think you'd been dreaming about me,
God gave you everything you need and more,
What Id give to feel those arms hug me,
genuinely, honestly, no love withholding

If I was your vice,
I would be the answer to your stress,
Of all else you try,
I'd always bring out the best,
You'd spend time with me ,
defend me to the end,
You'd be incredibly loyal,
I'd consider you my best friend

No recovery program could treat,
the connection we'd share no one could defeat,
You'd need to see my all the time,
reminders of me everywhere, your life would be a shrine,

Wish I was your addiction,
Upon a star non fiction
never ending hole so deep,
Life would seem more complete

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/15/2013 4:16:00 AM
I have a belated Great Work for this poem. I often look for new stuff from some of my favorite poets, that must be getting life's inspiration right now, lol, and should remember to go back and see older poems I haven't read yet. This is definitely one of my favorite poems. I will definitely one day further the comment. Great work here.
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Date: 3/15/2013 1:52:00 PM
:) Old stuff is just as important as the new. Sometimes better :)
Date: 7/26/2012 11:56:00 AM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Sharon. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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