Wish I Had a Garden

Once had been to distant relatives place.
Captured a glimpse of scenery -a roomy astounding garden located in their backyard.
It was a biggish "wow" for us.
The whole day we played forgetting our mum and dad.
As I am deeply attached to nature~
observing those tall standing trees,tiny little plants,swift flying birds were such gratifying..
Had a peaceful brisk walk & got thoroughly drenched in satisfaction.
Time was gliding very agile.
Further, we began to explore more curiously & hurriedly..
Climbed on the tree picked reachable guavas, blackberries,gooseberries, mangoes and gobbled them with hearts contentment.
We swung ,played,slept on the branches for that entire day(..to be monkeys for a day was thrilling ..though we didn't realise at that moment ;-) )
Me and my little brother filled our school bags full of fruits to carry home along with us.
My inner heart compelled to steal away the bountiful garden.
But sad ..practically that seemed impossible!
Aah.. still I reminisce that "one day"experience..
it was such soothing to be in that environment which was dressed in lush greenery and flowers,butterflies decorated as it's ornaments.
Everyday we dream of having a desired garden like that ~in future ..
if we ever own a house.

11-6-2020

5th place in the Contest.
Note:Garden Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Dear Heart.

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Date: 6/18/2020 5:42:00 PM
Deepa, congratulations on your win in my garden contest _Constance
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Date: 6/19/2020 2:05:00 PM
Hello mam, Thanks a lot for the appreciation and encouragement_constance Best wishes for all your works too.. Take care.Warm regards ~Deepa:-)
Date: 6/13/2020 7:12:00 PM
These are beautiful memories that make me smile Deepa. We miss the innocence of childhood because it felt heavenly. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
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Date: 6/14/2020 1:27:00 PM
Thanks a lot.. Yes mam..your right.:-) But still ..Me and my brother are ready to find a space like that to enjoy .. Wish you to enjoy too..:-) Take care.Much love to you.~Deepa
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