Bukang Liwayway Poet Free verse

Wish Granted In Nine Days

Nine days of waiting for the results,
For the good news that I've been dreaming,
To take my vacation for one month,
Wish granted that’s what I've been praying.

The time has come and I’m so happy,
To be away from my busy world,
Take a rest while I still have a chance,
White beaches wait for me…I’m coming!
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“Wake up!” It’s 9 o ‘clock! …………Ohhh, A DREAM?


January 19, 2013
For Tracie's Contest "9"
1st Place Winner

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Debbie Duncan February 10, 2013 at 7:20 PM nicely written Maria ;}

Jack Ellison January 22, 2013 at 7:40 AM White beaches remind me of the white sands of Siesta Key Beach on the west coast of Florida! Twice a year for about 20 years we vacationed there! Hope to get back there at least one more time and not wake up realizing it was a dream! Congrats on your win! LHugs, Jack

Yanny Widjanarko January 21, 2013 at 8:45 AM Congrats on your win :D

Ralph Taylor January 20, 2013 at 6:12 PM Congrats on your win, Maria - Ralph

Christopher Bunton January 20, 2013 at 1:46 PM Congratulations on your win!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 20, 2013 at 11:31 AM Congratulations on your top spot Maria luv xx

Poet Destroyer A January 20, 2013 at 10:09 AM Hi Maria, , :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice nice nine lines in Tracie's :-) " #9 " awesome contest... love always ~PD

Len Gasun January 20, 2013 at 9:26 AM Congratulations on your big win my dear friend! love/hugs, Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 20, 2013 at 7:43 AM Nice one Maria luv, 6 days to my holiday xx

Sara Kendrick January 19, 2013 at 4:38 PM Oh! I was caught up in your dream then the alarm..Great work..If for a contest, should be in the winners' circle..Thanks for your visit to my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2013 at 6:37 AM I wish for you that it was not a dream, well done Maria. - Good luck in the contest "9". - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)