Wish

In twilight's embrace, a world serene,
Where whispers dance, a soft ballet,
Beneath the stars' celestial sheen,
A tapestry of dreams to lay,
With hushed embrace, two souls entwine.

The moon's glow weaves a silver thread,
A love unspoken, hearts aglow,
Through valleys deep and mountains spread,
In every step, their bond will grow,
Two spirits bound, forever bind.

Across the ocean's gentle foam,
Their spirits soar, no bounds can tame,
Through tempest's roar, they find their home,
An eternal flame, unending flame,
In unity, their hearts combine.

In twilight's embrace, a world serene,
A symphony of life's embrace,
Through trials faced and battles keen,
They will stand as one, unyielding grace,
Their love's embrace, a sacred sign.

A journey shared, they will walk the line,
With hope in hand, they will face the dawn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 8/10/2023 2:54:00 PM
The unending confidence as two become one, no challenge is unbeatable. It's easy to be engaged with such lovely imagery, Jay. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill
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Date: 8/8/2023 8:52:00 PM
A beautiful poem of hope and the joyful expectation of two hearts bound together and beating as one. I too feel the same as hinted by Andrea... ! If you had waited a little more, you could have cooly walked away with a trophy.
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Date: 8/8/2023 4:08:00 PM
Lovely writing. Hey, unless this is for another contest, you should have waited until Constance presented her W word contest. It will be coming up soon.
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Date: 8/7/2023 8:07:00 PM
ahhh a fellow romantic wordsmith....love it and what a fascinating display of imagery laced across the depth of love's embrace....welcome to the SS Wordsmith, we romantic ones command the aft deck because we deserve a better view....
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