Wish

 Dreams are the wishes you make

        Before you settle to sleep

Wishes are your dreams at stake

       Stirring in your soul deep. 




25th April 2023



Contest: Writing Challenge W words
Sponser: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawrence Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 4:23 PM
Beautiful words from the depths of your heart dear Akanksha ! Lovely poignant word play . Congratulations on your win . Susan :)
Ayantika Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:44 AM
Thank you very much Susan:)
Kauffman Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 10:25 AM
Lovely thoughts, Akanksha. Congratulations on your win. Blessings.
Ayantika Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 1:45 AM
Thank you, Sam.
Kendrick Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Ahh!! I like this winner. Way to go. Congratulations and thank you for sharing these winning lines. Sara
Ayantika Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 8:20 PM
Thank you for the sweet comment:)
La France Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 12:55 PM
Akanksha, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Ayantika Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 2:20 AM
Thanks so much Constance for my placement. I loved writing this one.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful and true write. Few words with much said. Have a great/blessed day..............
Ayantika Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 9:02 PM
Thank you so much!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Hello Akanksha Avantika, so nice to meet you. I enjoyed to read this poem twice. enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 3:25 PM
Hello Akanksha Avantika, you are very welcome. It is a wonderful poem. Keep on writing. Enjoy your evening my friend
Ayantika Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Thank you from my heart. It is lovely to know you. Thank you for appreciating my poem:)
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