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One of those days feeling blue, a long time since I saw you. Thinking about all those moments we shared together. All those little things without a meaning at that time, that now worth the whole universe to me. I wish I could turned back the clock to hear your voice again. I miss your advice, I miss you telling me off. I wish we could be sitting one day on that bench at our favourite park. When you used to make plans for our life together and I was so scared. Too young I was when I met you, but you dug into my depths. We had such nice time starting a new life, a sweet dream in a new home. Harsh life without many means, but happiness. A humble nest was made to watch the sea from the balcony of our hearts. To watch the oldest lighthouse in the world shining to our bedroom, to our bed where one day you said to me: I wish I could stopped and capture this moment forever. I wish it could be that easy. I wish I could be captured those lively years I spent with you. I wish I could be in that old apartment we started with, to put up with all the good and bad stories between us. Now that I'm feeling down, but happy, because nobody will rob those scenes from my life.I just wish the best to the one that whisper to the birds and listen to the wind, with charm enough to catch my whole being. Although our love couldn't be, we had friendship for long time. I wish I could keep the best we've always had: that honor to make us sitting on the same bench at he same park. 04/23/2023 Constance La France Writing Challenge - 'W' Words - Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/30/2023 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing with us. Sara
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/30/2023 6:35:00 AM
Thank you Sara. Congratulations to you too. Hugs
Date: 4/27/2023 1:46:00 PM
Maria, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations !
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/27/2023 1:53:00 PM
Thanks again Constance!
Date: 4/26/2023 7:33:00 PM
Hello Marie, Kind piece of poetry Well done Congetulation on your win in the Contest
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/27/2023 12:10:00 AM
Hello Alfonso. Thank you so much.
Date: 4/24/2023 2:54:00 AM
- Lovely wishes, Maria ... a wonderful poem for the contest :) - All the best :) - hugs
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/24/2023 3:07:00 AM
Good morning Sunshine. Thank you so much. Have a great day.
Date: 4/23/2023 11:36:00 PM
we have regrets, and it can be longing, thanks for the emotion and delicate penning yann
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/24/2023 12:06:00 AM
Thank you Yann

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