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Wise Shepherds

When the star was seen high overhead Both the wise and the low there were led But the wise men detoured And with Herod demurred So they took the long way back instead But the low ones went straight to the place And there gazing upon his bright face Having felt quite a stir Strong aroma of myrrh They were shepherded home in his grace

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Date: 12/2/2018 4:51:00 PM
A perfect poem for this time of year, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/2/2018 12:26:00 PM
I found this poem to be poignant and deeply spiritual, Mark. Competition for this contest was awesome and you did a great job. Thanks for supporting the contest with your witty verse. Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn
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Mark Elam
Date: 12/2/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn for the opportunity! I enjoyed the other limericks very much. So much creativity from poets on this site.
Date: 12/1/2018 9:22:00 AM
This is quite beautiful and poignant. To many people choose the wrong path.
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Mark Elam
Date: 12/1/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Richard! Truly the meek will inherit the earth.

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