Wise Shepherds

When the star was seen high overhead
Both the wise and the low there were led
But the wise men detoured
And with Herod demurred
So they took the long way back instead

But the low ones went straight to the place
And there gazing upon his bright face
Having felt quite a stir
Strong aroma of myrrh
They were shepherded home in his grace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:51 PM
A perfect poem for this time of year, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 12:26 PM
I found this poem to be poignant and deeply spiritual, Mark. Competition for this contest was awesome and you did a great job. Thanks for supporting the contest with your witty verse. Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn
Elam Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Thanks Carolyn for the opportunity! I enjoyed the other limericks very much. So much creativity from poets on this site.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 9:22 AM
This is quite beautiful and poignant. To many people choose the wrong path.
Elam Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 10:02 AM
Thanks Richard! Truly the meek will inherit the earth.
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