Wisdom Spoke

foot in a blender
skin sliced thin, jagged
bicycle spokes spinning
how i learned to wear shoes

dad’s rottweiler-yelling
as mom assesses
claustrophobic on commode

dinner would get cold
cut into throat, nose, neck, spine*
red beets**

heel to toes ice cold
perched and prepared
by ER doc;
airtight in butcher wrap

dinner reheat —
words caught in my throat
tears freshen glass
i gulp

t’morrow’s door
slams on my son’s thumb
it hangs like a loose nail
hanging out on the commode
i scream
the children’s father assesses

my son’s sister slammed the door
...on the verge,
pindrop suspense

i warn my husband
not to blame
not to shame
i carry wisdom in my pocket
words to do no harm

carry the son, unhinged with tears
swaddle his sister with blanket

am i better than my parents?
i just have a leg up;
this time

my feet lead me, by example

10/28/2020

*reflexology reference
**embarassment

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/11/2020 2:06:00 AM
Very powerful ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2020 4:12:00 AM
Thank you, Kai!
Date: 10/29/2020 4:08:00 AM
It is much easier to let those angry words fly, but I see you have learned your lesson in a variety of mishaps which reminded me of moments in my own life I had forgotten so thank you for this one Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 5:41:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! We write differently as we grow older, having rolled the experiences around in our head for awhile.
Date: 10/28/2020 9:09:00 PM
This brings me back to those hectic days of falls, bruises and hapless accidents that I had to deal with raising two boys. I get this! Very clever verse with well executed lines..excellent poem, Kim! :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/28/2020 9:10:00 PM
Very entertaining to read, too! :)
Date: 10/28/2020 3:19:00 PM
Brilliant title, brilliant write. It's wonderful when we can actually learn something from experience. Deeply felt, Kim. Healing and Hope, Gershon
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Date: 10/28/2020 8:30:00 AM
A lot of thought in this poem Kim, and questions only you can answer..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2020 9:11:00 AM
Childhood pain...we always seem to go back to it! Blessings, my friend
Date: 10/28/2020 8:03:00 AM
Kim..this is poetic-fastic! Unique!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2020 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, lovely lady!
Date: 10/28/2020 8:01:00 AM
Accidents do happen. Can't be helped. Time heals. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2020 8:20:00 AM
For sure!
Date: 10/28/2020 7:27:00 AM
That is wise to the bone...Well done
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2020 8:00:00 AM
LOL...thanks
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