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Wisdom In Fathoms

Poetry is a body of water, With the title being its' surface; The context deep or shallow. It's as far in the water, One chooses to go... ____________________________ Inspired by a good friend of mine. Conor Jordan's artistic eye and Spoken knowledge helped me greatly. His wisdom speaks oceans. Our first collaboration of many... There’s wisdom to be found, In the depths of a poem. If we choose to submerge our mind. We hope you enjoy! Thank you

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Date: 1/14/2009 11:19:00 PM
So much said in a little but beautiful way.
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Date: 1/12/2009 4:22:00 PM
Great depth in a short verse............great work
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Date: 1/10/2009 4:23:00 PM
Ive never looked at it like that.Nice Poem.
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Date: 1/3/2009 1:13:00 AM
That's a wonderful write...Such depth and meaning you have here...conveys the endless wisdom of poetry...Great! Farah
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Date: 1/2/2009 9:03:00 AM
Hello Raul, thank you for your comment on Her Lover. Yes Raul all to true and yes I did enjoy this poem very much
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Date: 12/31/2008 3:36:00 AM
yummy- poetry is a body of water-- very good, Raul!! Thanks for creating it!!
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Date: 12/30/2008 6:50:00 AM
Raul, ths is an amazing write for all the depth and beauty it possess. I love this. It is truly an inpired write and I look forward to more of your combined effort. GBY Love Robin
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Date: 12/29/2008 11:48:00 PM
Nice collaboration guys. I love the depth of this poem. I submerge myself totally in a poem. I really enjoyed your tribute poem. I see you write so many and now it's nice to see some return to you. Thanks for your support and advice. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 12/29/2008 9:30:00 AM
Wise words, well written. Here lies great truth. Enjoyed very much. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/29/2008 2:55:00 AM
What an aaesome write here, I love it! Excellent and so so true - brilliant! Love, Kristin
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Date: 12/29/2008 1:20:00 AM
Excellent write here Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/28/2008 10:14:00 PM
Wow, the depth of this poem is deep. You guys spoke oceans here with one stanza. Your work is very ingenious. The first collaborative piece I've seen on PS.....Maybe Collaboration could be a new form-Who knows it might go somewhere. If so, you guys pioneered something special. I can't wait for more. DN
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