Wisdom In Fathoms

Poetry is a body of water, 
With the title being its' surface;
The context deep or shallow. 
It's as far in the water,
One chooses to go...




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Inspired by a good friend of mine.
Conor Jordan's artistic eye and 
Spoken knowledge helped me greatly.
His wisdom speaks oceans.
Our first collaboration of many...
There’s wisdom to be found,
In the depths of a poem.
If we choose to submerge our mind.
We hope you enjoy! Thank you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
January 14, 2009 at 11:19 PM
So much said in a little but beautiful way.
Lopez Avatar
January 12, 2009 at 4:22 PM
Great depth in a short verse............great work
Martin Avatar
January 10, 2009 at 4:23 PM
Ive never looked at it like that.Nice Poem.
Chamma Avatar
January 3, 2009 at 1:13 AM
That's a wonderful write...Such depth and meaning you have here...conveys the endless wisdom of poetry...Great! Farah
Williams Avatar
January 2, 2009 at 9:03 AM
Hello Raul, thank you for your comment on Her Lover. Yes Raul all to true and yes I did enjoy this poem very much
Mc Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 3:36 AM
yummy- poetry is a body of water-- very good, Raul!! Thanks for creating it!!
Gass Avatar
December 30, 2008 at 6:50 AM
Raul, ths is an amazing write for all the depth and beauty it possess. I love this. It is truly an inpired write and I look forward to more of your combined effort. GBY Love Robin
Neal Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 11:48 PM
Nice collaboration guys. I love the depth of this poem. I submerge myself totally in a poem. I really enjoyed your tribute poem. I see you write so many and now it's nice to see some return to you. Thanks for your support and advice. Love Elizabeth
Winter Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 9:30 AM
Wise words, well written. Here lies great truth. Enjoyed very much. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 2:55 AM
What an aaesome write here, I love it! Excellent and so so true - brilliant! Love, Kristin
Strand Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 1:20 AM
Excellent write here Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Neal Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 10:14 PM
Wow, the depth of this poem is deep. You guys spoke oceans here with one stanza. Your work is very ingenious. The first collaborative piece I've seen on PS.....Maybe Collaboration could be a new form-Who knows it might go somewhere. If so, you guys pioneered something special. I can't wait for more. DN
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